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Could anyone help correct my essay?
Thank you.
Title: Why people in the developed countries are less happier that the people in the developing countries if they get richer.
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Money can't buy you happiness, an old quote proved to be true in many developed countries, it says that richness isn't necessarily linked to a happier life for those in rich countries. Nevertheless, people are getting happier if their financial status shifts to a better level in developing countries. The divergence in the results may be due to very simple circumstances.
First of all, the measurement people take are different. Those who earn 60,000 dollars a year will not be satisfied with a yearly increase of 500 dollars in the salary, but 500 dollars could bring full joy and happiness for a family with 2000 dollars income each year. This example isn't meant to compare the exact amount of money earned by the people in wealthy countries and those in less well-off countries, but it's an example to show that people who had possessed less would be happier if they get any.
Secondly, the economic growth is driven by the indigenous work of the people. People in the developed countries have to work under high tension in order to catch up with the speed of the GDP growth while the pace of the life wouldn't have reached the turning point for people in less well-off countries. That may also explain why people in the developed countries may not be as happy as they should be even if they got rich.
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teaching at home or at school
Some people believe that teaching children at home has more benefits than letting them go to school while others think the opposite of them. In my opinion, both of the two methods of course have their positive and negative sides.
The most recognized beneficial point for for individualized home lessons can be designed for each child. The traditional schooling put all children in a furnace and neglect the differences in terms of the stages of each child's intelligence development, either because of lack of public resources or the relevant legislation and regulations. Moreover, the variety of lessons provided by the public schools certainly are limited due to the reasons mentioned, for example, lack of professional teachers in music, sports, or even housing courses; shortage of instruments or equipment.
However the education for a child is not only the responsibility of the parents', neither do the teaching at home is an ultimate solution for the child's lifetime development. Humans are social animals, children start to learn how to teamwork and get along with their fellow human beings from the age that they are in the kindergarten. It will certainly be the inevitable experience of everyone’s growth, and could not be replaced by the interactions with home teachers, parents and the elderly.
Given the truth that either method may not be adequate to fulfill a child’s need of development in multiple levels, in order to be grown up a valuable person, a child should not escape from the common schooling, and he/she should seize the chance of being taught otherwise in their spare time. Thus the balance of learning among the peers and studying at home could be found to optimize the child’s potentiality and possibilities.
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(help) Studying at home or go to school?
Some people believe that teaching children at home has more benefits than letting them go to school while others think the opposite of them. In my opinion, both of the two methods of course have their positive and negative sides.
The most recognized beneficial point for for individualized home lessons can be designed for each child. The traditional schooling put all children in a furnace and neglect the differences in terms of the stages of each child's intelligence development, either because of lack of public resources or the relevant legislation and regulations. Moreover, the variety of lessons provided by the public schools certainly are limited due to the reasons mentioned, for example, lack of professional teachers in music, sports, or even housing courses; shortage of instruments or equipment.
However the education for a child is not only the responsibility of the parents', neither do the teaching at home is an ultimate solution for the child's lifetime development. Humans are social animals, children start to learn how to teamwork and get along with their fellow human beings from the age that they are in the kindergarten. It will certainly be the inevitable experience of everyone’s growth, and could not be replaced by the interactions with home teachers, parents and the elderly.
Given the truth that either method may not be adequate to fulfill a child’s need of development in multiple levels, in order to be grown up a valuable person, a child should not escape from the common schooling, and he/she should seize the chance of being taught otherwise in their spare time. Thus the balance of learning among the peers and studying at home could be found to optimize the child’s potentiality and possibilities.
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Can anyone help to improve my IELTS writing task 1, letter to a friend of caring for a pet
Can anyone help me to improve the writing in terms of vocabulary and structure and not limited to the grammar? Thank you very much.
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Dear Mary,
I’m so thankful that you are able to take care of my dog Popeye while I am traveling in Thailand.
My vacation starts on 11.12 and ends on 11.17 and I will take Popeye to your house on the evening of 11.11 with his dog food and toys. Popeye will not pee or poo in the house so please take him out at around 5:00 pm to 6:00 pm every day and remember to hold tightly to the rope because he actually got lost once when he got too excited in the outside.
Popeye is a very lovable little puppy and will not make any trouble and I hope you will like him. Since the weather is getting colder, I will also pack some old clothes just in case he would need to keep warm in the night. If there’s anything that I can think of, I will bring them together when I take Popeye to your place.
BEST,
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In what cases we should not use "the" before a noun?
For example sometimes I want to say "I need to attend the classes held in the semester", are these two "the"s necessary for the sentence?
The other question is if I tried to say "I need to balance the work and the life" this was incorrect because the correct saying is "I need to balance work and life"? So why cannot I use "the" in this expression?
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A letter to the Dean to explain why I need to withdraw from two courses
Dear Prof. James,
I am writing to ask if I can drop out from two courses: STAT602 and MATH601. Currently I have enrolled in 4 courses made up of 16 credit hours and it is an extremely heavy schedule.
The main reason that I have to give up the two lessons is because beside the course work I've already enrolled in, I was required by my supervisor Prof. Thomas to participate in his new project - the field research of the new rural area economics in Nova district, this would make me difficult to balance the field work and the school work. I used to be fully optimistic with both sides at the beginning of this semester but after one month's struggling I started to realize the real balancing I could lead to is to focus on one current project and reduce the course load for now.
I have already talked with my supervisor Prof. Thomas and he was fully supportive to my decision, he also mentioned that the school policy allowed the student to request for a tuition refund if they made a decision to withdraw from the class within 6 weeks from the course beginning. So I would also like to request for the reimbursement.
Thank you,
Best regards,
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