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Sure‘s Notebook Entry #4:Climbing the mountains
I would really appreciate if you could edit the entry in more of a “natural“ way.
Thank you for reading and your corrections.
Today is Thursday, the 3th March. Our company would hold an activity about climbing on this Sunday which only allow women to join in , greeting the ”Women's Day“. I would like to take part in the outdoors activities, especially in climbing hills. I love the beauty of nature, with its wide blue sky, green trees and steady mountains. All about this could help my mine peace. Come on! My lovely day.
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Sure's Notebook 3: Making some friends
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Hellow everyone. My name is Sure, a native Chinese graduated from college last year,and now work as a technical assistant at a japanese company. I have been an anime fans since I was a junior student, and I usually read comic and watch animation in the weekend. Of course, now I am learning English everyday, looking forward to improving it. I have an idea on writing a notebook everyday and hoping making some friends. Are you interested to exchange and correct the notebook in the language which we want to learn? In fact, maybe we could help each other and improve together.If you have any questions about chinese, feel free to ask.
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Sure‘s Notebook 2:I am a anime fans
As we all know, there are a lot of people loving anime all over the world, and I am one of the number in it. I have been read comic
and watched animation since I was a junior school student. I was shocked and absorbed in a animation named "Hikaru no go“ on a sunny day during summer holiday, with the expression of the character when they are concentrating on playing go. Then I
touch more and more varieties of comic and animations, and now I am a new employee who is still loving anime.
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sure‘s notebook 1
Hellow everyone.This is the first time I write a notebook here.I am really looking forward to improve my English, and now I just do it. Thank you for your reading and correction.
sure‘s notebook 1
I have studied English for a long time when I was a child. But I just could read and understand some English. I poor at writing and speaking, and I want to chang it. Last year I graduated from college and Now I'm a new comer at a Japanese company. I have not enough time to learn English compareing the time when I was a student. I will try my best to do it.
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