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Please, somebody could check this? I need to write down two short answers, and prefer put it here before. Juan Pablo, you are completely right!! You take advantage of being workmates in the same IES for a long time ha-ha Juan Ramón. Very wise answer, one notices you are a father ;)
17 ottobre 2016
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Workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undevalued and should be paid more. Do you agree? It goes without saying that I completely disagree with the fact that actors, company bosses and some privileges people earn limitless amount of money while other workers by far much important, don't. How can be possible that the person better paid in the whole planet were a superstar soccer player? Is our society crazy? One could feel that this is a question of business and make money. From my point of view, some professions are vocational and those people devote their life to others, of course they don´t stay there for money, for instance, nurses, doctors and teachers. To begin with, nurses are usually people who have a vital role in helping sick people in hospitals. Not everyone could stand to work in that way, day after day. What about the doctors? In fact, they spend their whole life investigating and studying in order to save other's lives. In my opinion, one fear criteria to decide how much people are paid should be based in the responsibility their job involve. Take for instance, the role of the teacher for young people. They have so much responsibility than they can decide with their job and motivation, the future of some students. I was thinking not only in teachers, nurses or doctors also scientifics and researchers, all of them deserve a better salary, but mostly a better reputation. All thing considered, I leave you with a thought. What would it happen if instead of those lots of minutes for soccer in the news were to show the audience great and interesting researches or how a student improve with the teacher's encouragement? Surely, something would start to change. I truly believe in the wisdom and common sense of people in despite of the fact that a few one only believe in money.
25 luglio 2016
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Could somebody help me with this writing? Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to request details about the Tennis Course. An advertisement which I saw on the Internet yesterday. I am very interested in the course since I am a enthusiastic lover of the racket sports. Lately, I am playing lot of paddle however I rather play tennis. I would like to take advantage of the course in order to improve my technique/skills, although I have an acceptable level, as my playmates say. I need to explain to you the inconvenient I will have for the last three days of the course. I will be abroad for an inexcusable job interview, that is why I will have to lose three days over fifteen. I would ask you for a proportional refund for the days off in the course, if that were possible. Another solution would be to take three additional days in the next tennis course. I would appreciate it if you could take my case into consideration. I look forward to receiving your reply. Yours Sincerely, Carol
25 luglio 2016
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Please, someone could correct my writing? Your language school recently celebrated a festival for students, with music events and a cookery competition. You decide to write an article for your school’s magazine. Expressing your opinion on the good and bad aspects of the celebration, and Proposing an original activity to celebrate such events in your school. Write between 225 and 250 words. The last First of April our Language School celebrated as the last years a Festival for students. I couldn’t resist expressing my opinion about the event with your readers. The idea of cookery competition was both, interesting and original, since it was the first time that takes place in the Festival. Lots of students take part of the competition and each one did their best at cooking their own “Tortilla de patata”. The great idea was that at the end, everyone could try some pieces of different “tortilla”. Excellent idea! Besides, the whole organization of the Festival was impeccable. It was a perfect occasion to meet other student that you can´t meet during the course, because everybody is in a hurry to arrive at their class. On the other hand, I have a complaint to make against the music events. Who was the responsible for choosing that kind of music? Horrible sound and old-fashioned music. Please, next year, the music has to improve, as it’s so important for the Festival. I propose live music, there are lots of young artists; rock bands, pop, indie music bands whose would like to play live in the Festival. Should be a huge opportunity for the young artists could play and for students to enjoy live modern music. You should consider the idea for next years, in my opinion; it will be a guaranteed success.
18 aprile 2016
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Someone to help me with the corrections? An international magazine has asked its readers to write an article giving tips on how to pass one’s driving test and be a good driver. How to pass one’s driving test without death in the challenge. Is there something more difficult at eighteen than pass one’s driving test? All life long, people have inevitable to pass all kind of exams or tests from early school until old age, that’s life. Plenty of obstacles and difficulties that we must get over with. One of the first is to get the driver’s license especially if you don’t get excited about drive but you just need to drive. It’s should be a heavy, painful and troublesome to handle with. So, two powerful advices; be patient and practice as much as you can, there’re not more secrets. If you are the one that like driving, everything becomes easier. Just with practice and hours driving a vehicle you will have got the driver’s license at once. How can we consider one person is a good driver? Good driver is a person who is responsible, never get nervous in spite of circumstances of the road and he puts on the other shoes. Good driver always seems to pay attention, not so easily distracted and never ever, he relaxes looking at his smartphone. Always wear seat belt, same for passengers too. Moreover, respects the traffic signals. In conclusion, if everybody who drives a car complies the rules as described above, there would have far fewer accidents
16 aprile 2016
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One more Exam Writing. WORKING ABROAD It's a fact thar in the last years in Spain, not only young peaple also peaple etweenn forty and fifty can't find a decent job. Our politicians didn't mind at all, maybe they have "another own problems " to attend. If instead having stealed million and million of euros, the should have been working in creating employment opportunities, so that these young peaple shouldn´t go abroad to find a decent and proper employment. What most peaple seen to forget is that in other countries of Europe either things are better. Above all to young s without cualifications nor studies. Those youngs will be exploted or they will find low-paying jobs as a waiter for example. Other case are youngs whose have studies, with one or two degrees and speaking languages. They are our generation more preparated. Most of them are engineiers, doctors, investigators what mean that own more brilliant brains go abroad and maybe we will lost them forever. Since they will be good paid and the will have recognition; over there, fact that here in Spain would be imposible! The effects of this lost, we will suffer in a few years when Spain becomes a countrie of old peaple and no qualified youngs, if new politicians don't start to change the actual situation.
11 aprile 2016
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One more writing to practice Write about 150-180 words following the instructions. You have read this advertisement in an airline magazine. The University of Westminster offers rooms for your every need from June to September.We offer a choice of convenient locations thoughhout London at affordable prices, Now we are looking for a Spanish full-time secretary with excellent level of English to deal with Spanish and South-American students. We need qualifications, proven ability to deal with costumer enquiries, previous experience, IT skills and ability to work flexible (and sometimes long) hours. Send covering letter to Ms SAndra Dee at the address bellow. Write the covering letter, including the following: What the University ask for. Why you want the job and why you are perfect for it Why you could be a benefir for the company. Dear Ms Sandra See I am writing to reply to your advertisement for a Spanish secretary in the airline magazine. I have always been interesting in dealing peaple and as far as possible, to help them to feel more confortable in a new place where they just are arriving. Myself, I have been living in London for two years and also I felt very lost in the beginning. For this reason I would be able to help their students, just as I had helped many times. Besides, I know very well all the interesting places of London. I actually have some experience as secretary in Spain. So I have excellent references from my last jobb as secretary of direction in a big company. You asked for a full-time job, that shouldn't be any inconvenient for me as I used to work very exhausted and end-less journeys. Apart from that, I passed the Cambridge Certificate in Advanced English last year with prove my English ability. For all of that I think I should be a competent secretary for your university. I would be very grateful If you consider my application. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Please don´t hesitate to contact me if you need further information Your faifhfully, Begoña
10 aprile 2016
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I need someone that could help me with the corrections This is a Writing Test. Article: Obesity is becoming a serious problem among children. Obesity years ago was a maintly problem in adult peaple, however recently the problem is becoming more worrying, because they are children and teenagers who are suffering this terrible disease. We can consider it as disease since it's an enormous risk for the health of young peaple. We live too fast, we dont have time due to the bussys and stressful, plenty of activities day. It's think that the way we feed has gone on to a background. Fast food as a hamburgers, chips, sugary soft drinks, all kind of sweetyes are too often the way our children and teenagers eat every day. Besides that, the many hours they are watching TV or playing with the Play Station, or just with the smartphone dont help at all to prevent obesity. In my opinion, a good action plan should be both, to incorporate necesaraly sports after school and healthy diet. That should be the key, sports and healthy food without sweeten no even fats. Only with those two premises, we could get throught with childhood obesity. Thanks in advance. I know they're lots of mistakes. I need some more practice.
8 aprile 2016
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