please help me to correct my writing, thank you in advance. Dear Professor Wang, My name is Guangyu and I was enrolled in a four-month advanced English training in New Century College, which is a part-time evening course, twice a week from last month to August. I am writing to inform you that there is an unexpected change in my work. I am a full-time civil engineer working for Beijing Damei Real Estate Company. Yesterday the director of my department informed me that the company decides to send me to Shanghai branch for a new project for three month. Therefore, I would not be available to attend all the rest courses. It is a pity and quite a loss to me to quit the study. I wonder if you could help me to postpone my course to the next semester for me to continue my study when I come back from Shanghai. Otherwise, if I must quit, could you kindly to help me to refund part of my tuition fee. Thank you and look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Guangyu it is an ielts writing task, at least 150 wrods are required.

please help me to correct it, thank you in advance. Dear Bob, I am very sorry to hear that you were bothered so much by the noise from my house these days. I do apologize for your suffering and I will fix the problem as soon as I can. A piece of water pipe in my bathroom was leaking last week. Because it is underneath the concrete floor, I have to drill some holes on the floor for inspection with my drilling machine which caused too much noise by that time. Luckily the broken part has been found yesterday. In order to finish this repair work efficiently, I have contacted with a local construction company and they will send some professional plumbers to fix it. AS we discussed, some advanced engineering methods would be taken to avoid too much cutting and drilling works which could mainly cause noise. I think all repairing work could be finished this afternoon and no more noise will trouble you any longer. Please take my sincere apologies on this issue. Best regards, Guangyu

Ielts writing practice 0606, please help me to make a correction. Thanks a lot in advance. Dear Bob and Jane, How is everything going these days? I hope it would be fine with all of you. Thank you again for your kindly hospitalities and helps during the tour in Australia last month. I have received those fantastic photos you took for us yesterday. Certainly it will become the most precious memories of this trip. We have just moved to a new apartment last week, which is located in the CBD area and quite near to my office. It took us the whole weekend to clean everything up. Sorry to reply you so late. There are three bedrooms in our new apartment and it is only 5 minutes walking distance to the central subway station which is a easy connection to most scenery attractions and famous historic relics in the city. I know both of you are interested in Chinese traditional architectures, and hope you to visit us in Beijing soon. Look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Guangyu

Could I write it like this ? Broken wings Went out of the arena with a bitter disappointment Eliminated again before the second round Hardly to win even one set Do not know what to do Cheer up, Go Go Fun-to-you I wrote this after we lose the match in an ameture badminton tournament, and the name of our team is Fun-to-you. I do not know if I could write it like this with short and uncomplete sentences. Please help me to correct it.

Ielts writing task, please help me to correct it, thank you. Dear Bob, I am so excited to tell you that I got a new job in Dada Investment Company recently. As you know that the traffic jams are so heavy and it took me two hours to go to the office when I worked for the last company. I was so frustrated by that time, but now I am no more suffering. The new office is only three kilometers away from my home. Dada is a local company mainly on real estate fields. I was offered a position of the director of marketing department and there are eight colleagues in my team. The main responsibility is to make feasibility analysis, which is quite important for the company to make a thoughtful decision, for all the new projects. I also want to inform you that I am going to attend a reunion party in Shanghai with my classmates next month. Helpfully I may have chance to visit your house. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards. Guangyu

Please help me to correct this writing, thank you. Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my deep concern in connection with the news about the Beijing International Airport’s redevelopment plan which is reported in Beijing Daily yesterday. I am Guangyu and I have been living in Dongheng residence for more than ten years, which is only 5 kilometers away from the airport. Airplanes could cause numerous noise during taking off and landing. Especially in the night, Sometimes I could not fall asleep until 1:00 or 2:00 am when is air traffic is lighten somehow. As I know, most people who live in our neighbourhood are suffering the same problem as mine. Secondly, there are heavy traffic jams in the highway which connect the airport and the city centre in the morning and evening. It will take us extra one hour to struggle to go to the office or go home. I understand that airplane could bring us lots of convenience and help us save time, but living in such a noisy environment can really cause much harm to our health, such as hearing or nervous system diseases. What I am worrying about is the redevelopment plan of the airport could make the situation even worse, so I object this plan. Before the government takes any further decision, I suggest that a comprehensive environmental affection research must be done in advance. It is responsibility of media to appeal the government make more efforts and measures to let our living environment better and better. Thanks and looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Guangyu

Yang jiang's words we were so anxious for the splendor in our lives, but at last we found the the most beautiful parts lie on the calm and ease deeply in our heart. we also wanted to get others's compliments from time to time, after that we started to know that the happiness is none of anyone's business.

writing task，a letter to explain that you are not able to take the job which starts next week. Dear Bob, I am so excited to recieve your offer letter of the job which starts next week, but i am not available untill next Friday. I am going to attend a reunion party, which we planed two month ago, with my college classmates in Shanghai on this weekend. After that, i will visit some of my friends and go Disneyland just opened recently with my family. According to the schedule we will be back Beijing next Thursday. Sorry for the inconvenience that this alteration may bring to you, and possiblely we may discuss some issues about my work via email or some other communicational facilities. if you have other solutions, just let me know. i am looking forward to hearing from you soon. yours faithfully. guangyu

prepaid card Usually you will be asked to buy a VIP card when you have your hair cut somewhere in Beijing. It is not a new trick that customers are forced to do so in beauty salons, foot massages, car washing shops or other shops like this in the service industry. The more money you deposit the more discounts you could get. Then you always want to go there again and again for you are not sure how long that shop will last. Maybe a few weeks later it just disappears suddenly as if it has never existed, and there is no way for you to get the refund of your account balance. Furthermore, what embarrasses you most is that your friends would mock you for your bad luck what we call RP. Is that my fault ??? 在中国，当一件坏运气的事情发生在你身上，朋友经常揶揄你，说你人品差，low reputation？简写为RP。。。