Please correct my sentences I wrote. This is the explanation of some mountain that I climbed. I want to post these sentences on my blog(*) with natural English. Please help me. *https://gogomountain.blogspot.jp/2016/11/nyoho.html ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I climbed Mt.Nyoho which is located in Nikkou of Tochigi prefecture. I was so excited when I walked on the snow! Finally winter's coming after the so long summer. I climbed this mountain to examine for next climbing in advance. I'm going to climb this mountain once again in next January with mountain climbing club's members. I'm playing a role of leader at that time so I need to find the places we set up a tent. Because it would be very difficult to climb for just one day when it is covered with lots of snow. Mt.Nyoho has completely turned yellow and red. On top of that, it already started to wear a winter clothes. Even though I couldn't enjoy the view on the top because of the bad weather, but I'm satisfied. I can't take all of them at once. Since the bad weather keeps the ices and snow from the sun, so I could enjoy it. I hope I can see the fabulous scenery on the next climbing of January.

Please correct my sentence I wrote. I bought the sticks for mountain climbing a few years ago. But I didn't use it frequently. When I climbed some mountain last month, it had completely broken out. At that time, I swear that I'll never buy some gear in mont-bell which is specialized in mountain gear in Japan. Although I bought a new one, I went to mont-bell because I was curious that it can be repair or not. I though that if the repairing cost is reasonable, I'll pay it. One week later, I received the answer from the shop. They said it can be fixed with free of charge if I want. I was so glad to hear that. But, I can't still believe completely that the equipment is safe enough when I climb some steep mountains.

Could you please correct my sentences? I'm goingt to post these sentences on my blog. Please check and correct if it contains sound strange English. https://gogomountain.blogspot.jp/2016/09/azumayasan.html ----- Mt.Azumaya is located in border between Nagano and Gunma Prefecture, Japan. There are some similar name's mountains. So, I often mix it up with Mt.Azuma or Mt.Asama. This aria is famous as a farm(Sugadaira) and ski resorts. I think everybody can climb this mountain because it is very easy to climb even if you aren't used to mountain climbing. Although there are some steep path, but it's no matter. In this time, I used the bullet train then I didn't need to get up early. It was very good access from Tokyo. But it makes the mountain to be crowded in good weather on a weekend. If you want to feel calm atmosphere, I recommend to go there on November. And you need to caution to climb in winter because it'll be covered with a lot of snow after December. ----- Thanks for your favor.

Could you please correct my sentences? I'd like to post below sentences on my blog.(https://gogomountain.blogspot.jp/2016/09/hakkoda.html) Please correct it. ---------- Mt.Hakkoda is located in Aomori Prefecture, Japan. It is one of the mountains that was designated as 100 famous mountains in Japan.The distance from Tokyo to Mt.Hakkoda is about 700km (430miles). Then I took an overnight bus to get there.(You can use the train of Shinkansen, but it's very expensive.) As a matter of fact, there is not exist the name of Mt.Hakkoda. Mt.Hakkoda is consist of several mountain. The most highest mountain is Mt.Odake(1,585m). And the next of Mt.Odake, there are Idodake(1,537m) and Akakuradake(1,521m).We call the Mt.Hakkoda as a generic name. I climbed above three mountains at this time. If you go there, I recommend to go the Kenashi Wetlands and the Sukayu Onsen(hot spring). You can go the Sukayu Onsen from Odake via Kenashi Wetlands. I confident that you can see the fabulous scenery and you can enjoy good quality Onsen in Sukayu.

Please correct my sentences. The GPS device that I bought last week is the most advanced device in the world in terms of the accuracy and lots of functions in same kind of model that we can carry around GPS. We can also use a smart phone for GPS. But it is useless in mountain because of an inaccuracy. The smart phone’s GPS is said that it have 50~100 meters of error of GPS. Therefore I can’t find my route when I got lost. Sometimes It’s dangerous because I would go wrong way. Especially when I’m in white-out, I can’t believe it. If I was on a cornice, I would fall and to death. In the snowed mountain, I need a high level’s accuracy. And a smart phone is very week agains low temperature, water and shocks. My new one have 3~5 meters of error of GPS. Provide that I make a map that I indicated the way where I walk in advance, I can find the way even if I’m in white-out. Therefore I invest one thousand dollars in it. Is it expensive?

Please correct my sentences. Starbucks released the Starbucks Card Application that I can use it in my iPhone several month ago in Japan. I had to bring a Starbucks Card until then, but I don’t need to do any more. The App notices a lot of useful information. I can confirm the money (balance?) that I charged the money and historical data when or where I used it. The app also offers a auto-charging function. Therefore, as long as I bring my iPhone, I don’t need my wallet during my lunch time. The IT innovation makes us more convenient.

Please correct my sentences. I sometimes spend the lunch time in Starbucks because I can use WiFi during staying in it. The WiFi is essential for me so that I study English like hearing podcast, reading articles etc. I can also use the internet via LTE, but it is so slow during the lunch time because users increase rapidly in that time.

Practice Phrasal Verbs Could you please someone correct my sentence? (get on, get at, get out of, get up to... etc) How are you getting on? Me? Well... The pressure of work is beginning to get to me. It's time that I should get down to do my work but I don't want to do it. Don't be getting at me. Did I get up to do something wrong? I just can't control my motivation. Because there's nothing to get something helpful out of my job for the future. Well… let’s get on to the our lesson. It's time that we get started.