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Do you like delivery? Hi, guys . I'm here again. Today I want to share my feeling about delivery. I am in my summer vacation which lasts nearly two months . During this two months ,I have nothing to do except feeling bored everyday. And since I am living with my grandparents, things can be worse. For they have already retired from their jobs so they stay at home all the time——just like me. So , they will take charge of every aspect of my life, especially my grandma. She asks me to do the laundry everyday and bothers me all the time. Our dishes are made by my grandpa who is not good at cooking. So, I am looking forward to eat delicious food for many times. I found a great thing on the internet recently——the delivery. For you can order the dishes online, leave your address and pay it online, finally they will delivery it to your home. All you need to do is stay in your house and wait for the doorbell rings. Great, isn't it? But, the question is, my grandparents don't like me eating it. For they believe it is unhealthy, they are junk food. And still, it also had the minimum purchase and delivery fee, so I can't buy it frequently for it's a little expensive for me. And I found an interesting thing .Some restaurants don't have the delivery fee, but their minimum price is much higher than any other restaurants. Maybe it's just their marketing strategy,I guess. Anyway, even though my grandparents are not willing me buying it, but I still love it. How about you?

The reaction to reading a book Today I finished reading an interesting story named Who Moved My Cheese?.It's a short story,I really enjoyed it,though. This story teachd me how to face the changes in my life.As we all know,the only constant is changes in the world.And if we met some changes which totally change our lives,we may feel upset or shocked,just like the plot .And the reaction of the changes determine who we are.Some people they may accept it easily and go with the flow,others may think it is unacceptable. Actually,from my point of view,the reason why they can not accept the change is they do not have the courage to adjust themselves.They do not dare to leave the comfort zone and take an adventure.The fears keep them where they are.In the meantime,they will suffer from the effect of doing nothing. Life moves on,and so should we——This is what I learned from this book.So, when we face the changes,we just need to gather our courages and ROCK ON! This is my second time writing an article on italki,I am looking forward to receive your corrections or comments.Thanks,everyone!

Hello！ Hi,you guys!My name is Lulu,and that is my first time to write something on italki.I know I may make some mistakes on this essay,but……I am really glad to recerive the correct from you. I am a student in the university,and I will become a junior student in the next month.My major is Journalism and I really like it. Today I spent whole day with my best friend and we hung out in a mall.And we met our common friend while we were walking .What a coincidence! We haven't met each other for nearly five years!Then,we sat down and talked about the things happened on us recently,it was really enjoyable.I am very happy for I spent a meaningful day with my friend!