A exciting day A exciting day of my life was the day I went to AQUALANDIA, a water park. It is in Benidorm, in Alicante province. I spent a good time with viki, although at first we were lost, we had a big day. There were many atractions as, for example, a toboggan of threety three meters along. in fact, viki didnt want to run down this toboggan for its height, it is the toboggan tallest of the world. Other atraccion was a tour on big floater around of all park. We finished the day eating a glass of hail from a 1 meter along, it was very, very good.

can we corret me this composition? My perfect Christmas is to be with my family and my girlfriend, they are my best gift. Also, I really like Christmas dinners because there is so much food and the atmosphere is amazing, we are very happy. After dinners the adolescents go out to the disco for fun. I am not especially Catholic but I like to spend time with my family and my friends because I live outside. Although it is a good time, we remember people who have already gone to heaven and long for their company, but the important thing is to enjoy with the family members who are still here.

What am I watching now? I am watching an anime series called “One Piece” on internet, on “pordede.com” website. The series is based on the adventures of a group of pirates. The captain is Luffy and he is a rubber man because he ate some magic nuts. The crew is composed of 5 members, Luffy and his comrades. All members seek the great treasure, “The One Piece”, and for this, they have to visit different very dangerous islands and face great monsters and strong pirates in a mysterious place called “Red line”.

My life this week My life this week. Can we correct the composition please? This week I will am busier than last week. I will work the final project of the master degree on Monday morning and I will take courses related to telecommunications in the afternoon. Next day, I will go to the English academy in the morning. In the afternoon, I'll go to the university at 15:30 and return at 17:30. Wednesday I will work the final project in the morning too and I will go at the same time as last day to university. I will go to the cinema at night. Thursday, I will go English academy as Tuesday and I will play handball in the afternoon at twenty O'clock. Friday, I will play handball too and I will go out with friends in the night, we will go to the disco. My birthday is on 25th November, next Saturday. I will travel to Cordoba at the weekend because I will play a handball match the day of my birthday. finally, Sunday, I'll be tired from work done in week. That day I will rest and I will go to bed early, at 22:00.

Can you correct my invitation? Do you want to come to my party? Hi! I am Luis Carlos and I am going to do a party in my property on friday. It will has a lot of kind of drink and food, several concerts and good atmosphere. The party starts at nine o'clock and the admisiion ticket costs ten euro. The money of the admission tickets will be to cover expenses. Would you like to come to the party? You're invited.

The first composition Could I correct my first composition? Please. Hello my name is Luis Carlos and I am twenty four years old. I am studyng telecomunication enginnery Master. I want to learn English for to can traveling. Actually, I am living in Cáceres but I am of a small town called "Villafranca de los Barros". I would like knowing to people that they want to learn espanish for changing lenguages, although I am very shy.