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Carved stone balls
Carved stone balls are curious type of artifact found at a number locations in Scotland,there are several theories describe there use. However, the lecture disagree with the reading.
First, although the reading claims the carved stone balls were weapons used in hunting or fighting, the professor says if used in hunting or fighting, stone balls will break in pieces or creak, it won't be round in shape.
Second, the speaker refutes the reading by mention stone ball's weight. Though are article states the carved stone balls were used as part of a primitive system of weights and measures, the professor argues that they were carved from several types of stone, different stones have different density, so they will have different weight,it is impossible to measure quantities of grain or other food on a balance of trade.
Third, while the article indicates the carved stone balls served a social purpose as opposed to a practical or utilitarian one. the speaker point out that most of the patten are too simple to be as elaborate designs and also high status people will buried their stuff with them however the stone balls are not be found in the tombs or graves.
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I do not criticize others,
because nobody is perfect,
Even if people see their "defects" as large,
they are proud to accept themselves,
bravely show their true colors to the world,
and so we shouldn't make strange vision to them.
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There are several reasons to suspect that the story of burning mirror is just a myth and Greeks of Syracuse never rally built such device. However the professor has different viewpoints.
First,the article claims the technology for manufacturing a large sheet of copper with such specifications did not exist int the ancient world.The professor says an example shows that dozen of small flat polish coppers can arrange into parabolic shape and form a large burning mirror.
Second, the speaker refutes the article by mention material of the boat.Thought the article stats wooden object took ten minutes to set the object on fire,the professor argue that there's other material that makes waterproof,catch fire quickly.It spread to wood so it can be an advantage weapon.
Third, while he article indicate a burning mirror does not seem like an improvement on a weapon that they already had flaming arrows,the speaker points out that burning mirror is more surprised than flaming arrow, because burning mirror just see the mirror and suddenly fired.
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Paleontologists have proposed that one of the most common North Slope dinosaurs survived the winter by migrating south to more hospitable regions,and there are several arguments support the migration hypothesis.However the professor has different viewpoints.
First, although the article claims the edmontosaur's diet supports the migration hypothesis, the professor says the edmontosaur don't need to find food, because it's warmer than now and it's 24 hour for the sunshine.It's good for plants to grow so there's lots of vegetation around.Even winter they can eat nutrient dead vegetation.
Second, the speaker refutes the reading by mention edmontosaur live in herds. Though the article states many mordern-day migratory animals live in herds and this supports the migration hypothesis, she argues that edmontosaur live in herds for many reasons,for instance extra protection from predators.And also some animals live in herds but they don't migrate.
Third,while the article indicate speeds of the edmontosaur could have easily to move to warmer climate region, the speaker points out that not yet adult edmontosaur could slow down the group because they need adults to take care of so they can't reach the worm region during the harsh arctic winters.
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Robert E. Peary was a well-known adventurer and explorer. He claimed to have reached the North Pole,there's three argument provide strong support for the truth of his claim.However, the speaker has opposite view point about this.
The first point is that the committee's investigation. Although in the article it claims, the committee declared Peary had indeed reached the North Pole.The speaker says the committee's report is biased because they are Peary's close friend and they support Peary's trip.Also, the investigation only 2 days, they didn't see his record carefully.
Second point is that the lecturer refute the reading by mentioning speed issue.Thought the article states that's possible Peary reached the North Pole 37 days after setting out from Ellesmere Island off the coast of Greenland, she argues that the way Tom Avery's trip is too different to compete with Peary's trip.Tom Avery carry less than Peary because his food is drop by the plane. Moreover,weather condition is different.Tom Avery travel in favorable condition unlike Peary travel in unfavorable condition.
Third point is that photographs.While the article indicates Peary's photographs correspond exactly to the Surf position as it should have been on that day,the speaker point out the sun shadow is hard to measure sun's position as well as the photograph is blur and unfocused also it's fade so it's not conference to be as evidence.
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In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes
Morden technology development has made our lives faster than before, so nowadays people concern more about efficiency. As a result, people try to work higher speed but to risk making mistake.
With the assistance of modern techniques, we work faster than before.For instance, people used to made cloth by their own,sewing day and night. In contrast ,cloth that we are wearing now, most of them are produce by machine in the factories,fast and large quantity.However there are luxury brands still use handmade clothing as their high price goods, because it's high quality and unique.
Despite machine produce product quickly but because it's fast so it's hard to control their quality, in the end we will have to spent more time to fix or check it, yet, it might cost twice the time to find out mistake also will need more human resources working on the same project again.
So if we spend longer time doing on our work but making sure that every procedure are correct.We won't need double check and can make the process work fluently, still we don't need to worry about if the mistake cause a disaster.
All in all, I disagree with the statement that people should risk making mistake to work quickly. I think that making less mistake is more important than working fast.
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Some people might disagree that celebrities is more important for Young people however i agree with the statement.Because of the following reasons.
First,they are popular topics that young people talks about it consequently,social communication,can be the easiest topic to have conversation when they know each other in the first time.It’s more quickly to makes friends with others by talking the person that they both know.
Second, those celebrities influence young’s behavior and favors.As an idol,young people greeted their idol by copy their acting or wearing.So it’s significant that what celebrities behave no mater in public or private.And that’s why they should apologize to public when they do something wrong,because they might effect people as a model role.
Third,they lead the fashion for young.As they have not sure what kind of style suit to them,they try lots of style by looking the photo of their idol.Therefore,in case there is a subtle change in their aesthetic.When i was teenage,i love COCO Chanel so mush,so i always wear black and white and hope that i can be as elegant as she is when i grow up.I ask my parents to let me learn fashion design,hope one day i can be a designer just like her.
To sum up,the elder people have lots of experiences that they know what kind of people they are and what kind of people that they are going to be.Conversely,the young are in the process trying to figure it out what kind of style is fit to them.As this process it is easily be influence by their favorite public figures.
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