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TOEFL a writhing section
Hi, I will take a TOEFL next weekend.
Today I practiced a writing section.
If someone correct my grammar, that would be nice.
Thank you for this in advance.
This is a topics
032: Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Those are my ideas.
1 life is only onetime no regret
2 money will be noting
3 see more different cultures
This is my answer.
Some people say that people should same money for future, because when we become adult,
Have kids, we really need money.
Other people think that people should enjoy with their money when they earn it.
If asked you asked them, both side would provide logical reasons to support their stance.
I think enjoy money when we earn it for some reasons.
Let me explain what I mean.
First of all, life is one time.
I think this is the most important for us. For example when my mom was single, she worked
a lot and saved money. So she didn’t much enjoy her young period of her life , she said too much focus on her future and save money. Now she says if I could go back to when I was younger, I would like to go on travel a lot and see many cultures.
Secondly, money is nothing when I die.
Even I would save lots of money, it would be juts like peace of paper.
In my opinion, people should enjoy life, make many experiences as much as we can,
We can’t buy memories, experiences by money.
Thirdly, when we go on travel, we learn many things.
I started travel around the world when I was 18 years old.
I work and earn money then spend money for traveling more than saving.
But I have never regretted because I met many people whose very nice to me, also I saw many different cultures.I have learned many things, also
In conclusion, for the above reasons.
I think enjoy my money more then save for future.
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TOEFL writing
I am studying English for the TOEFL exam. (this is for a writhing section)
I hope you help improve my English.
Thank you for in advance.
Topic:
Movies are popular all over the world. Explain why movies are so popular. Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
My answer:
I will explain why movies are so popular.
There are a couple of reasons.
Allow me to explain.
First of all,movies are good for family time both watch at home,
and a cinema.
when I watched movie with my father,we talked really a lot than
usual, after the movie.
He is busy for work we don't have much time to spent
together and we don't much talk each other recently.
It was makes me happy a lot.
Secondly, personally I think movies are better than dramas.
When people watch a drama, we can't miss even one episode
But sometimes it's pretty difficult for us, because
every one buys for work, study, and take care kids, family etc .
Movies don't need wait next episode, easier to enjoy a story
than a drama.
Thirdly, movies are good for learn history etc.
When I was a student, I wasn't big fan of a history subject.
Even though I was very interested in war movies and I learned
lot of second war from movies.
in conclusion, for the above reasons.
That's why movies are popular entire the world.
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TOEFL writing
I'm practice English for the toefl exam.
This is a writing section.
If you correct my sentence that would be nice.
TOPIC :
In your country, is there more need for land to be left in its natural condition or is there more need for land to be developed for housing and industry? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
My answer :
Some people think that my country Japan needs for land to be developed
for housing and industry in order to be better business conditions.
other people think that my country needs for land to be left in its natural condition in order to keep beautiful nature, protect the earth from global warming.
if asked, both side will provide logical reasons to support their stance.
I would say there more need for land to be left in its natural condition.
Let me show you what I mean.
First of all, the earth temperature is getting warmer cause of people.
People cut threes, built many buildings, make rode for
car that's why temperature is increase.
for example this summer in Japan, some places it's reached 40 degrees.
Even some people were died, mechanic machines were broken
because it was too hot.
Secondly, animals come to cities and farms for look for food.
they used to don't come down to those places, but recently there isn't much place to live and look for food for animals because people cut threes off.
That isn't good for animals and not only animals it isn't good for human either.
For instance, my mom's friend family has a farm, there were many
vegetables, but one day animals come down and they picked some vegetables up.
In conclusion, for the above reasons.
I think there more need for land to be left in its natural condition.
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TOEFL SPEAKING SECTION
There is a TOEFL speaking section quiz
What is your most important possession?
Describe it and say why it is so important.
So this possession means PLACE?
in the case my answer will be
My most inpatient possession is a beach.
There are a couple of reasons.
Firstly I really love to swim at a beach, because I love to swim with fish and look for shells.
Secondly, I love to chill with my family at the beach, when we go to the beach, we keep smile more than usual.
That't why my most important possession is a beach.
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TOEFL speaking section
There is a TOEFL speaking section quiz.
Describe a time that disappointed you. what happened and what's your response.
I disappointed when a train was stopped due to rainfall.
I was supposed to go to Yamanashi, but suddenly the train stopped and I was stuck in the train for a while.
I had to go back to my home town Gifu. I decided to go there next early morning.
I had to cancel some of my plans and I west money for transportation.
That's why I was very disappointed the time.
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TOEFL speaking section
There is a TOEFL speaking question.
Do you like to make a plan with friends about social activities in advance or plan it when you attend it?
My answer is
I would like to make a plan in advance.
There are a couple of reasons.
Firstly, I would like to prepare for anything(something?) in advance .
Secondly, I don't want to be rush, if I make a plan when I attend it, I may feel uncomfortable and can't enjoy.
That's why I would like to make a plan in advance.
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TOEFL
Hi, there is the TOEFL exam speaking question.
Which of the following three activities do you prefer to do with a group of people rather than alone?
1. Eat a meal
2. Listen to music
3. Do homework
My answer is
In my view definitely eat a meal.
There are cuple of reasons.
Firstly, I love to talk with someone while eat a meal, I feel as though a meal is yummier than when I eat alone.
Secondly, I get feel lonely when I eat meal alone.
I can enjoy listen to music alone, I prefer do HW alone, that's why I choose eat a meal with a group of people.
(My answer have to be in 45 second)
Thank you in advance
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TOEFL
Hello, I study for toefl recently.
So I can't understand a question that"Do you like to make a plan with friends about social activities in advance or plan it when you attend it?"
This mean is do I like to a make plan before attend it or make plan while I attend it?
This is a speaking part question.
If you give me an example answer, would be nice.
Thank you
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ATTEND
Hi, I have a question today.
I found this sentence
Why aren't you attending the party?
I though attend is noun and it supposed to be why don't you attend the party?
Does anyone can help me?
Thank you
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After went to a Beach
Last Sunday, I went to the beach where I go there since when I was little on last Sunday.
I'm all the time happy to go to the beach and swimming there!
but, there are too many people on the beach..maybe more that you think.
I wasn't here is Japan for two years, I was kinda forget about that...it was bit surprised to me
I wish there wasn't too many people..
Even though, I enjoyed spent my free time there.
Beach and music make me happy! also my dream is live in near by a beautiful beach!
On Monday morning, my voice was really wired and felt heavy...
Although I thought I will recover within few days, I'm still sick.
Feel sleepy and can't concentrate anything..
I finally had time to go to a drag store yesterday, so I bought medicine! I hope I will recover soon and hope I can enjoy this over the weekend.
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