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Help me check errors

Hey guys! 

I’d like someone to help me check errors in my paper. I feel sorry my paper is a little long. 

If you don’t mind, comment here or drop me a line.  

だれか手伝ってください!

おねがいします。

4 dicembre 2018
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Correct grammatical errors. I read the bible in the class, and then it gave me a lot of life lessons. Of the many lessons, some lesson deeply impressed me. In the Genesis 3 is the lesson. In the chapter we can read the familiar story of Adam and Eve. First of all, before telling the lesson taught by them, I would like to describe the content briefly. Adam and Eve, who were God’s first children on earth, were living in the Garden of Eden. They did not feel any sorrow and pain, and also they didn’t find each other naked. God prohibited them from eating from the Tree of the Knowledge of Good and Evil. However, they ate a fruit from the Tree of the Knowledge of Good and Evil, because the Snake tricked them into eating. As a consequence, God punished all of them for Adam and Eve’s eating and the Snake’s trick. I think that the story teaches you a life lesson; the lesson is that breaking a rule causes us to have bad things or we have to take responsibility for our action. Adam and Eve were tricked by the Snake and ate the fruit from the tree of the knowledge of Good and Evil, as was prohibited by God. They should have thought what would happen after eating it. We must be taught the lesson from their action. I think that people living now in the world do not really take responsibility for one’s action. For example, an example would be being late for a meeting. Being late for it might cause a lot of people to be in trouble as a result. Another example would be not accomplishing some ordered work. Some people, especially being young, tend to give up hard work partly because of the Yutori education, which was temporarily regarded as a problem in Japan. We should carry through any work without giving up and with responsibility. This is why we have to take responsibility for our action and anything. Our action would probably have influence on anyone else. So all people had better live with responsibility.
16 luglio 2018
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Let me know some differences

Please teach me some differences! 

Do you know the way of using the computer?

Do you know the method of using the computer?

The sentences above are, probably, correct. I put “method” instead of “way”. Are there differences? Or which one is it more natural? 


I hope you guys will give me an answer. 

5 febbraio 2018
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Grammar question

Hi, guys. 

Which following sentence do you think is more natural? 

“ I agree to this idea “ 

“ I agree with this idea “ 

I think, having looked up the word in the dictionary, the first one is natural. However, I saw people using the second one. I’m concerning...

Look forward to your answering. 

29 gennaio 2018
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Looking for English speakers.

As the title shows, I’m looking for English speakers. I wanna chat or talk in order to improve my English. In return, I’m bound to teach Japanese. Please feel free to contact me or add a comment. 

英語を上達させる為に、英語話者を探しています。チャットや会話をしませんか?よろしくお願い

23 gennaio 2018
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Happy New Year. Hi, guys. 2018 has come, as many as 24 days have passed though. haha And, my university exam term has, at last, been over, and then spring vacation’s come to me :) University spring vacation inis Japan is normally over on 4/1, so it’s quite long. How about your country spring vacation? I’m thinking of how I will spend my long vacation. If I had enough money, I could travel overseas. haha Say, there is one thing that I want to do this vacation. I’m gonna try to do this “Note Book” in order to improve my English skill. I’ll domu best. Anyway, I hope that my spring vacation will be super good! Thank you for reading.
23 gennaio 2018
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Questo contenuto viola le linee guida della Comunità.5 maggio 2017
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Want many friends on Instagram

Hey guys.

Dose everyone use Instagram? I didn't used to make use of the app, but I often use it these days. I don't have many friends on it. So I want to make a lot of friends:) I often post just in English in order to practice English. 

Let me know your Instagram name if you may. By the way, my Instagram name is rik_sea. 


Thank you. 

1 maggio 2017
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I Am in America #4 Hey guys. I'm in Florida, America. This is my first visit to America. The reason why I went here is to visit Disney resort in Florida :) I'm quite excited with it. But I'm worried about communication. I'm not good at speaking and listening, so I'll not be able to talk to any people. Anyway, I should do my best to talking with people. By the way, are there any places you recommend in Disney in Florida?
28 aprile 2017
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At night #3 Hi, guys. How's it going? Unfortunately, it was a freezing cold today, so I thought I was going to die, actually. Additionally, it was very windy! That sucked. Those made me really disappointed. I hope something good will happen tomorrow. That's all for today's notebook. It's a bit shorter than as usual though. Please correct my mistakes or unnatural English and leave some comments if you don't mind. Thanks, bye.
7 febbraio 2017
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