IELTS writing task
Hi everyone, I'm studying for IELTS, and trying some exercises at home, but I really need some feedback. HELP ME PLEASE! <3
Task 1:
You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
- describe the problem with the equipment
- explain how this problem is affecting your work
- say what you want the shop or company to do
Write at least 150 words
Answer:
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with my 3d printer. I bought it two years ago and I understand that it is out of the insurance period.
A few months ago it started clogging in the middle of my complex jobs. The plastic keeps getting stuck and making me stop the process. I work at home printing models for a huge company. The job that usually took me two hours now is taking me almost two days, causing me a lot of loss because of the delay.
I already tried to contact the store, but because it didn’t happen in the first year after the purchase, there is nothing they can do. So it is up to the producer. I am shocked by this situation. I am asking for a proper maintenance on my printer as soon as possible, or a complete refund, so I can by one that actually works.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully
Ms. Claudia Fanfa.
(171 words)