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Could you please correct my mistakes? Thanks in advance!
Yesterday Emma had a few of her friends over for dinner. She had graduated from university so she invited them to celebrate her success. They arrived at about 6p.m. They welcomed each other with a wide smile. They got inside, threw their coats over the back of a chair and went to a living room. They sat down at a desk and started enjoying their time. Emma had prepared a lot of delicious things. After a while she happened to pouring wine into glasses when John accidentally knocked her hand. Unfortunately she spilled all over his white T-shirt. He immediately ran away to bathroom screaming: "My new T-shirt! It will never wash out!" Emma felt so silly. She could see from his face he was being offended. His lovely T-shirt was of no use at all. Anyway she promised him to buy another one.
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Could you please correct this note? Thank in advance.
While Emma was talking on the phone with her buggy Tiffany. she asked her to speak faster because her cell phone's battery was running out of energy. At the time when Tiffany was about to tell her best friend something important, Emma's cell phone went dead. Emma got peeved. She decided to leave a house, got in her car and drove off to Tiffany in no time. Emma was so excited and she wanted get Tiffany's immediately. Unfortunately the girl got stuck in traffic jam. The traffic was snarled up because of an accident. Emma got steaming mad thinking that she would never get out of the road. In the end, after an hour delay on the road she arrived at Tiffany's. Her friend has been in the loop so Emma finally got to know the true story.
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Please correct this short story if needed. Thanks in advance.
Emma was just about to tell her boyfriend the truth but finally she got cold feet. She was not able to stick her neck out, so she couldn't get the fear off her chest. Furthermore, she had a lot of work to do that week. Untill next day she had to hold in her essay. Emma had planned to finish it ahead of a scheduled time, which was challenging by the way, but she hadn't coped with it. What's more, the girl had to study for her final biology exam. She was in over her head. In the end she dealt with everything succesfully. Then she decided to go away for a few days. Without any planning Emma just wanted to play it by ear. Now she is painting the town red in LA and she is not about to get home.
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