Can anyone correct this essay? Helping students in coping with stress The matter of students suffering from stress is really talked recently indeed. Some says that students have too full and badly scheduled time tables of exams while others say that students are just lazy. Well, I think that all this situation is not as simple as that. Although students are right saying that exams schedule are not planned in the best way in order to distribute exams equally during the exam period, the others are also right saying that a great part, maybe the majority, of students is lazy. We are facing a common problem of two alliance who are not willing to make a step further to help each other, so I am going to discuss which methods could be useful for both sides. First of all, we have to cope with the complexity of the timetable. Often happens that exams of the same year are scheduled in ten days’ distance from each other and this is a cause of stress. One possible solution may be a structured review of the method used to establish the timetable, such as inserting time-constraints on the minimum distance possible between two different exams of the same year. This could not only benefit students by giving them more time to prepare exam by not overlapping different areas of studying, but, thanks to stress reduction, students are more likely to get higher marks and all the school/university would increase prestige. Secondly, after the institution has made available a good solution to stressful timetables, students have to give their own contribution. One possible solution could be receiving support from tutors. This not means having problems solved by tutors, this means that tutors have, for example, to make students aware of how to efficiently manage time. It is real that a big part of students is lazy but often this is because they are not capable of coping with difficult time management. Stress is also cause by rush studying which is totally useless. Studying is a complex process which everyone has to manage in his/her own way, without forgetting that the core of studying is studying itself. Sometimes student get lost in trivial ritual which are totally worthless. I believe that the solution is found in the interdependence of the approaches. Schools or universities have to simplify the most the timetable in order to make easier the management of time worked out by students. This will help to reduce stress and increase performances.

I would appreciate if someone gives me a hand on it For many young people it is hard to find a job in which they can fit properly. This is because of the differences in terms of needs amongst schools and employers. While the firsts want students to be the best theoretical prepared as possible, the seconds would like students to be qualified in aspects of the working life Due to this, school should understand that providing a good future for students is its main purpose, and due to that, the school shall provide courses and qualification that could match the requirements which employers have. This does not mean that schools have to abandon their theoretical way of seeing education. This only means that schools and employers should figure out a way which benefits students the most. Moreover schools are unable to provide any useful carrer advice, maybe becuase teachers themselves have only had teaching as working experience. Maybe a good way to sort that problem out could be firstly remaining in contact with students who finish their studies. Then collecting data and information from these former students about their working experiences. Finally the school could call the most representative of them and let them give advices to students who want to undertake further studies. To conclude, the besta way lays with coordination among schools and employers. Schools have to understand that their "output" is the "input" for the employers. On the other hand, Employers themselves, have to understand that the purposes of school are not only to create a sort of working background but also to give students a good general education which is vital. This essay should be made for a C1 profile exam. If there is any piece of advice you can give me, please give it to me.

Essay on lifestyle. Modern lifestyle can seriously endanger our health. Do you agree? Write about: 1. Food 2. Physical activity 3. Your own idea. The majority of the population thinks that lifestyles we have now are totally unhealthy. The truth, I think, is that lifestyle is a matter of choice,thus every person, can ,in some way, create time in order to make his life healthier. Starting with food, eating junk food is not compulsory, there is surely healthy food available in every place of the world and so people are in front of a choice to make: eating healthy food which often requires long preparation time or eating unhealthy food which is easier to make? Secondly, physical activity which again is a matter of choice. We have to make a choice between being active or being sedentary. Working 8 hours at the computer doesn't mean you are sedentary, you can always find time for get exercise. In conclusion, I think that modern lifestyle means nothing, there are only bad lifestyles and good lifestyles unrelated whit the adjective of modern or ancient. Lifestyle is something that everyone has to choose.

A Living example Who has inspired you the most? Tell us why you admire them and describe the influence this person had on you. I think there are two people who have inspired me the most during my life. The first is surely my favorite uncle. The second of all is an atlhete, Kobe Bryant. My uncle has always been old fashioned and he has always been in love with motors. We passed our days entirely talking about vehicels without even care about the time we was wasting because for us, that time wasn't wasted at all! He had always taught me that things have to be done with all the calm required and that stressing does not ever take you anywhere. So i decided to be like him. The second one, Kobe, has taugth me the concept of resiliency. He got through bad injuries and bad teams and he has always caught the best from every bad situation he has fell in. He got his finger broken and he changed his shot tecnique, he got bad teammates and he changed his gamestyle only because what he wanted to achieve was winning. Now that I can't be in touch we my uncle and I can't watch Kobe on TV, I know that the two of them have inspired me as anybody had ever done.

Report on how spend money to requalify an area Your town has a large amount of money available to spend on improving the area around your school. Your English teacher has asked you to write a report suggesting how it can be improved Our school area Introduction The purpose of this report is to point out which can be the targets to be improved with the fund our town hall has made available in order to requalify the area around our school. The park As we all know the park besides the school had been abandoned for 5 years now and it has to be requalified in order to make some space useful for outdoor activities such sports. There, it can also be created an area where students can get exercise on their own. The parking area The parking area on the back side of the school is too small for all the vehicles our professors and our students have. A good way to spend the money could be enlarging the area in which the cars can park in, that not only may reduce the stress in finding parking but it can also make the school look more organized and better managed. Conclusion I, as pointed out in this report, recommend to spend the money to requalify both the park and the parking area in order to create an healthier environment in which students can learn and grow up.

Could anyone correct it? There are both advantages and disadvantages to a career as a musician or an actor. Do you agree? Firstly we have to understand the differences between a musicians who works in theater and the ones we can easily group under popstar category (Them who make world tours with 100000 public in concert). We also have to understand that the same difference occurs between actors who act on the stage of a theater and films actors. Everyone of them made a carrer on what they're keen and on what they love to do, this is wonderful but sometimes has some problems. If you are not used to see what you enjoy to do as a work maybe you might have some pressure problems becuase you have always treated that activity as an hobby and not as something that you must do in order to live and earn money. Being film's actors or popstars gives you popularity and privacy related problems but can also give you what I call social influence which can lead you to extraordinary results ad a human being. On the other hand stage musicians or stage actors may not be as known as their world relative said before, but thy could live their lives in a flatter way and probably could be known only due to their skills and not becuase their personal aspects of life. To conclude, I think the advantages balance the disavantages and everyone needs to weigh the opportonities they get in order to make the most valuable choice.

Could someone kindly correct it? Being famous as a film star has both andantages and disadvantages. Do you agree? Although being famous is fashionable, it carries a lot of negative things. Surely on one hand you have, from the outside, a wonderful lifestyle and a great media attention, but these could not be as you expect it. Often stars do not have what we think it is a wonderful life because they have problems having privacy due to the attention the media have on them. This cause them real life problems, infact many famous people, often, are not able to carry on their shoulders all that media-pressure and have alchool or drug dependance. I think, to be clear, that being famous has some advantages. Firstly you can be an example for other people and see them trying to imitate you, in other words you could have a sort of social influence and that is a good thing if you're thoughtfull. Second of all often being famous is often related to being rich, this do not buy you happyness but it could surely help, a lot. In conclusion being famous, as everything in life, is a trade-off among aspects of life that everyone of us see in different ways, so there is not a unique,right, choice to make.

Anyone could kindly correct my notebook? Review question: Have you stayed at a really good hotel recently? If so, our readers would love to hear about it. Write a review, saying where the hotel is and what it is like. You should also tell us about its facilities ad why you would recommend it. I was in Athens two years ago, precisely in the second week of September 2014. There we, me and my father, were staying in a 4 starred hotel which looked,from the outside, very beautiful. It is located near the central square, on the right of the old parliament house. As we arrived in the hotels the entrance instantly caught our attention. It had a modern forniture, all red-scale colored which was elegantly accompained with cold colored flowers, this contrast made up a strange environment which was a pleasure to be seen and was a pleasure to be lived in the next few days. In the reception, 3 kindly women were instantly ready to match every requirement we had. Our bedroom was located in the front facade of the hotel, so we had a spectacular view on the Parliament, which in the evening was all lighted up with slighty-colored light-jokes. The bedroom forniture wasa mix of modern and old style. Sometimes those mixes could be bothering but in this case it was awsome. I would recommend this Hotel not only becuase it could make a good compromise between cost and geografical location in Athens but even because there you will make a comfortable staying all served up with an exquisite surrounding.

I would really appreciate if someone could review and correct the mistakes that I have surely made. Essay question: Teenagers and your people should share housework equally with their parents. Do you agree? Write between 140 and 190 words Although it sound right to say that household chores should be equally divided on every member of a family, parents , or better mothers, do the most of it. That 's quite strage because often parents have less time than most of the teenagers do. On one hand teenagers are often being submerged by homeworks, on the ther hand if they manage those homework well, they're probable to have at least 2 hours per day for doing housework and then practise their favorite sports, which is vital. The real problem is that teenagers don't do housework as well, in terms of effectiveness, as parents generally do. My point of view is that chores are boring and should be made by the whole family together. This improves not only the relationships among parents and sons but it also gives teenagers some more tools for when they will go live alone for any reason (university, work, stages, etc..). 156 Words. Thank you in advice.