Please, check my abstract of the article, and correct mistakes. Hello, friends. I need help. It's very important for my publication The role of the fat component in the nutrition of preschool children The aim of the study was to estimate the structure of nutrition of children within the pre-school educational institution. The article presents an analysis of the daily diet of children of preschool age (3-7 years) living in the city of Ivanovo (group of round-the-clock stay). The realization of diurnal physiological norms of nutrition on the basis of the analysis of the menu-layouts was considered. In the course of this analysis, data on the fulfillment of the nutritional value standards for the diet (on protein, fat, carbohydrate and energy content) were presented. The fatty acid composition of the diet was evaluated. Evaluation of the nutrition balance of children was carried out on the basis of methodological recommendations "Norms of physiological needs in energy and nutrients for different groups of the population of the Russian Federation". The physiological usefulness of the fat component of the daily diet was assessed by the value "absolute deviation from physiologically high-grade food fat". The estimation was carried out using the Microsoft excel 2010 program. In the assessing nutritional value, the optimal content of macronutrients with an excess of energy value by 10% was revealed. In the fat component of the diet, an incorrect ratio of essential polyunsaturated fatty acids was found: linoleic acid and α-linolenic acid (26,3:1). Optimization of the fat component of the diet with the addition of encapsulated fish oil, the replacement of vegetable sunflower oil with linseed oil in a ratio of 5:1, the substitution of wafers with fat filling to waffles with fruit filling, and the addition of a sour-milk beverage to the diet was accomplished in order to adjust the ratio. The reducing of the prescription amount of butter in one dish of the ration in order to bring the content of fats in the diet to a daily physiological norm, was suggested. The suggested optimization permitted to correct the ratio of essential polyunsaturated fatty acids, as well as to reduce the content of saturated and monounsaturated fatty acids. The obtained acid ratio was 7,8:1. The final values of the content of basic nutrients and energy values obtained as a result of the study are also within the norm and do not exceed the daily requirement. Key words: pre-school childrens diet, nutrition, polyunsaturated fatty acids.

Final study semester! This week my last study semester has started. I feel a little anxiety about my classes, because it will be really difficult. Also, I have to work on my master's dissertation. It takes a time to complete the review of literature and the calculation part. I must present my calculations to the expert committee by winter. But despite these difficulties I am ready to study. This was my short note. Native speakers, if it is not difficult, correct this please :) Thanks in advance!

Stuttering - disease or wrong speech habit?

The end of bathing season in the Volga-river Today is the day of finishing of bathing season. Only swimming to the point my arms and legs get hurt helps to get warm in that very cold water. When I get off from the river strong breeze increasing the feeling of cold much more. There are lots of fishers and boats on the coast of the Volga-river. Actually the weather is good and the sun shines brightly but the end of summer speaks for itself. I don't pretty sure that it is without mistakes, that's why I will be glad you to correct me :)

Another historical place The inscription reads: "Memorable place of heroic resistance of monks of Cosmodemian monastery who were fallen in an unequal battle with Lithuanian-Polish Invaders in 1609 (Period of Russian turmoil (1604-1612)). Eternal memory for the heroes of Fatherland! 150 meters to the right direction towards burned monastery". I'm very proud to have stood on the holy place where the history was creating. Actually it is very interesting to imagine how people were living during the ages. I was breathtaked of thoughts that there were great battles in this place. But since that time nature has recovered and on the bones of fallen warriors the forest was appeared. A silence and weak breeze that waving branches with green leaves of those old trees can make you bored and sad. The marks of those events are a peculiar historical heritage that must never be forgotten, and as a consequence, should never be lost. English speakers, if it is not difficult, make it correct please, thanks :)

A trip across my home region Yesterday I and my friend went to a trip across the Ivanovo region. On our way we saw a large territory full of fields with green grass, lots of small rivers, and villages, where live literally a few people, and some of settlements were left. In those villages we saw very old churches, that were built in the eighteen century. Most of them are of very bad state, however at least two or three of them have been partially restored and doing their functions nowadays. I was fascinated and admired of these big abandoned buildings. They were built in style "classicism" and you can see characteric details of these style on buildings. Thus, that was a short description of my trip by bike with a total distance about 60 kilometres. Thanks a lot for reading! If there are mistakes in the text, make it correct please :)