hello can you check my English story? it's fairytale Long long years ago, there lived young man doing farming in the rural town. He was diligent so he earned good living but he was so lonely. So while working he always mumbled as if someone’s near him. One day the young man said while doing farming “Who can I eat all this grains with?”  Then he heard someone answered “Me!”  “Who’s speaking?” he looked around but could see no one.  So he asked again “Who can I  eat all this grains with?”  “With me!”  It was heard from under his feet. When he saw, there was a big snail.  When the snail saw the man, he went into the shell.  “What a strange snail it is?” Maybe I can take it home.” He took in to his house and put it in the pot.   Next day, he went out to the field and worked. He came back to home late night  “Oh so hungry! When can I make up all dinner?”  But when he opened his house he was so surprised and shouted  “What has happened? The food was all over there. He felt strange but since he was so hungry he ate them all. “It was nice dinner. Who made all this food?” He couldn’t think of anyone. But next day, and the day after there was dinner prepared for him. “That’s weird. Who prepared all these?” He was so curious.  So one day he made a trick. He pretended to go work and hid in the house. On the back of the wall he sneaked a peek in the house and the garden.  “Oh what’s that?” he saw white smoke filled in the kitchen.  Man went into the kitchen and opened the door. The smoke came out from the pot. Soon, a beautiful woman came out from the pot.  “Oh! How can this happening?” He was so surprised. She quickly moved to prepare dinner. Then the man went into the kitchen and said “It was you who prepared the dinner for me. Let’s live together from now.”  He said earnestly.  “No, not now.” “Why not?” The woman told the reason to the man She was an angel lived in the sky. But because he made a mistake, he had to come down to the land and lived as a snail.  “So could you wait a bit? After punishment, I can be your wife.” She said if they marry before punishment finishes, they could get the sad farewell.   “No, I want live with you right now.” He showed persistence. So she couldn’t help but to marry him.” “He he, my beautiful wife!” He was so happy to marry with her.   One day, the snail woman was on her way to bring lunch to her husband. Some noble men passed by “Get out of my way!”  She bowed. “Oh who’s that girl?” the noble man commanded.

fairy tale Long long ago, there was a world in the ocean governed by a dragon king.  He lived in a big, fancy palace. Because he walked day and night, he became sick.  “Oh my, My whole body aches.” He suffered a lingering illness.  “What can I do? It’s a big deal.”  “How can we cure the illness?” Retailers took a famous doctor.  “He became ill because he lost his vigor. He will get ok if he eats the rabbit’s liver.” This made him feel a bit better.  “Anyone who takes a rabbit’s liver will be awarded a big prize.”  The octopus came out limply.  “I’ll catch a rabbit.” Then a terrapin mocked.  “Haha, if you go up to the land, you will soon be caught by human and will be cooked.” The dragon king nodded his head and agreed.  “Then can you go instead?” the king asked to the terrapin. Then a catfish shook his head.  “Do you know how ‘Rabbit’ looks like?” terrapin could only scratch his head.  A crap who just came back from a tide land answered.  “I saw a rabbit with thick fur. He has a long cocked ears with short front legs while hind legs are longer.” The crap drew a rabbit on the paper.  With a picture of a rabbit, he came out to the land.  There was a green leaves and blooming flowers, birds were chirping.  “Wow! Land is also very beautiful like the ocean.” Suddenly, a rabbit appeared and hopped in front of the terrapin. He saw the picture and said “Right! That’s the rabbit!”  He approached rabbit. It was leaning on the rocks, resting.  “Hey aren’t you rabbit? A king of the land!” When he heard that, he felt proud.  “Hm! Yes, I’m the king of the land. Who are you anyway?” The rabbit nodded it’s head  as if it’d never seen the terrapin before.  “I’m from the deep ocean palace. I came here to meet a land of the king. The rabbit got so happy and smiled really big. “Haha Welcome to the land. It’s an honor to meet you.”  The terrapin wore a poker face and asked to rabbits. “Aren’t you sick of the land? How about going to the ocean together?”  When the rabbit heard it, he felt embarrassed and answered. “Don’t you know that the land animal will die when it goes in the water? “ “Don’t worry. I’ll take you safely.” But the rabbit hesitated.  He got in a stew and instigated the rabbit.  “In ocean, there’s no wolf who has sharp teeth. Of course no falcon.”  “I’m not afraid of them. Hm!” The rabbit prentended as if he’s really a king of the land.  “As a king of the land, I would definitely have to see inside of the ocean. I’ll trust you. Let’s go together!”

Hello could you chec my English sentences? In a rural area, there lived a rat couple. They were really happy but had one worry.  They didn’t have a baby. They prayed for a baby every day.  “Please give us an honor to have a baby.”  Because of their true heart, they soon had a pretty baby.  They raised the baby with love. She grew well and became a beautiful lady. She was so pretty that everyone in the town wanted to marry with her.  “Please let me marry with your daughter.”  “I can make your daughter to be the happiest girl in the world.”  But no one was a perfect man to them.  “My girl’s man has to be the most perfect man in the world.”   They decided to find a perfect man for themselves.  “But who would be the most powerful, handsome guy?”  The husband asked and the wife answered  “Maybe could that sun in the sky be the good man?”  “Maybe. It’s so hot that can make the world warmer and warmer. And it’s even beautiful.”  They made a long ladder and went up to the sun. When they finally met the sun, they begged and asked “ You’re the most beautiful, powerful man in the world. Can you be my daughter’s man?” Then the sun laughed. “Will you be our son-in-law?” the sun nodded his head.  “No, there’s more powerful, handsome guy.” The couple made puzzled look. “So who’s that?”  The sun sighed and said  “It’s the dark cloud. Although I want to shine, if the dark cloud blocks me, I can do nothing.” They disappointed and agreed.   “Where can we go to meet dark cloud?” The sun kindly told where he is. “Maybe you’ll see him near the sea cliff.” “It’s not easy to get the best son-in-law.”  The husband agreed.  When they get in the ocean cliff, they call out the dark cloud.  “Thrump” Cloud ran to the couple. :Why did you guys call me?”  “I heard that you’re the most powerful man, So can you be our daughter’s husband?” But he nodded.  “Sorry, I can blind the sun but can’t bit the wind. When the wind blows strong, I only can kick out. So wind is nor powerful than me.” So they had to find the wind. When they reached the field, the husband said “Where can we go to see the wind?” Soon the wind blew. “Why did you find me?”  “We’re looking for the most powerful man. Can you be our daughter’s husband?” He blew up the wind and showed how strong he is bit nodded his head.  “I might be stronger than the cloud. But not the most powerful in the world.” “Then who would be powerful? ?”   They felt questioning and asked.  “Even though I blow strongly, the rock on the mountain doesn’t move at all.”

could you chdck my english sentences? “Cuckoo, Cuckoo, Tweet! Tweet!”  In the deep mountain, there lived a kind doctor. He gathered medical herbs and when the patients come, he looked after them. He also cared some sick and hungry animals.  “Hwi Ying!”  One cold winter day, He was chopping the medical herbs and jhe heard someone calling him.  “Help me sir.” “Oh, there’s a patient calling me.”  When he opened the door, there was a baby tiger shivering in the cold weather.  “What! Tiger?” He was shocked and flopped down.  The doctor frightened and when he was about to close door, the tiny tiger cried and said “Please help me. My dad is suffering the illness.”  Tears sprang up on his eyes. Doctor couldn’t ignore the tiger.  “Ok tiny tiger. Come in.” He pluck up his courage and said “What’s his symptom?” “He has a bone stuck on his throat and he can’t have anything.”  He cried and said.  “I might become his food. But I can’t just leave him there.” He absorbed in thought.  Finally he decided and said “Ok, let’s go together.”  “Thank you sir.” The baby tiger bowed.  “it’s commendable that you came all the way here for your dad.” He went in to deep mountain to see the sick tiger.  In the cave on the middle of the mountain, there was a tiger groan in pain.  “Dad here’s the doctor. Don’t worry.”  The baby tiger said in high tone.”  “To rid off the bone, I have to put my hand in tiger’s mouth. Would that be ok?”  He worried and his heart beat fast. He approached the tiger carefully. “Let’s see. Open your mouth.” The tiger opened his mouth with a small growling.  ‘Ok, Hold the nerve and I can survive.’ The doctor examined tiger’s mouth.  He found a big sharp bone in his mouth. “Don’t move. Hold your breath I’ll rid off the bone quickly.” Tears fell down from tiger’s eyes. The baby tiger saw his dad with worried eyes.  After he sweated about a bowl, the bone has been pulled out.  “Grrrr” the tiger cried out satisfactorily.  “You would be so sick of this big bone.” He made a ointment with medical herbs and applied it in tiger’s mouth. The tiger bowed and said “ I’ll never forget your favor.”  He climbed down from the mountain delightedly.  “They can appreciate me to save their life. Although they’re animal, they’re better than ugly people.”  Few days later, the snow fall heavily. The snow laid thick and the road has been covered.

could you please chrck my English sentences? it's a fairy tale It’s a story about a small spring pasted from decades.  In the deep mountain, there lived poor old couple.  They were happy but a bit lonely because they didn’t have a child. The old man was a lumberjack who sells woods at the market.  One day, when he was about to leave, he said  “Honey, I’ll go deeper mountain today” “Ok be careful. I’ll make some ricecakes after sewing.”  He went on his way to the mountain.  “Chirp, chirp” While he was climbing, a blue bird suddenly appeared. “What a beautiful bird it is! The sound is even more beautiful.” He smiled and murmured.  The blue bird kept flap the wings as if the bird is trying to say something. “It seems like the bird wants me to follow.”  He tilted his head and followed the bird.  When he went deeper, he could smell the beautiful flowers and the wind breezed.  “Hey where are you going?” He kept flying and when the bird arrived a small spring, it stopped.   “It’s lucky! I was thirsty. I’ll have some water” The water from the spring was so delicious.  “It’s refreshing. I’ve never drank that refreshing, delicious water.” While drinking, the bird disappeared. “Suddenly I feel really sleepy. Maybe I will get a nap here.”  Right after he lean on the tree, he fell asleep. Soon he woke up.  “Time past so much. I need to be hurry getting woods.”  He ran to the bushes “I feel really strong!”  What happened? He gor younger while he was sleeping. The water from the spring made him younger.  The man whispered and came back to home with woods. When he saw his wife pounding grains he said gladly “Honey! I’m here” “Oh , who are you?” Woman felt awkwardness when she saw young man.  “It’s me! Your husband.” When she saw him closely, it was really her husband when he was young.  “What? what happened?” The man saw the mirror and saw himself.  “What happened to me?” He told what has happened to her in detail. “Maybe it happened because of the water.”  “Yes! That’s it.” They nodded and agreed.  The next day, the couple ran to the spring.  Wife also drank water “I really feel sleepy.”  When she slept a bit, she became a young beautiful woman.  “You became younger too!”  “Really?”  After drinking water, they went down from the mountain with joy.  When they got home, the wife said. “Maybe some’one came to the house.” Its was a greedy neighbor.  When they got in to the house, the greedy man asked “House owners are not here yet. Who are you guys?” “We are the owner of the house.” He wore curious face.

hello could you check my English sentences?🤗 Long long years ago, a charcoal dealer leaved in the town with his wife and children. He always made charcoals and took it to the market to sell. Even though they were poor, they were always happy. It was a day he’s going to the market. Wife told the charcoal dealer with a worried look. “Be careful at the 3 Year’s heal” “Ok, I’ll get back quickly.” On the way to market, there was a hill called ‘3 Year’s heal’. It named because if someone falls there, that person only can live 3 years. On that night, when he got back home, he cried out loud and said  “My life’s ruined. I might die soon.” The wife was so surprised “Honey, What happened?” “I fall at the Three year’s hill.” “What? Really? ” She was shocked and her face got green with fear.  “What can we do without you?” “How can I only live 3 years?” With anxiousness, he lied sick in bed.  “The charcoal dealer fell at the 3 Years hill” “How could he made that mistake?” One day, a guy visited the charcoal dealer and said “Hey man, don’t worry. I know the way to live longer” He sighed “Nothing would work out. How can I live long?” “No, you need to do what I’m saying you to do.” Long long years ago, in the mountain village, there lived 2 brothers. Older guy was so greedy and perverse. He only cared about himself and not others. But the younger guy was different. He was diligent and looked after his parents. One day, the younger brother went to the mountain to get some woods. He sweated a lot and put the woods that’s been cut down.  “Phew, it’s hard working. Needs some rest.” While sitting under the tree, he saw some filbert spread there. “Wow! What a big filberts! I’ll take them to parents.” He gathered them to his bag in hurry. The day got darker.  “ok, It’s time to go home” He carried all the woods and got up.  “uleuleung kwangkwang!” The thunder suddenly boomed and crashed and heavy rain started to fall. He quickly looked around to find the place to get in and found the old thatched-roof houses.  “I’ll get in there to take shelter from the rain.” It was too old so it looked like it will break down in a minute and nobody seemed to live there. But he yelled toward the house. “Is anyone there? I’m from the village below there. I’ll stay here until the rain stops.” And he went in to the house.  He felt his way in the dark room and set on the corner of the room. “ho-hum. Why am I so sleepy?” He yawned and his eyes were closed  He pit the straw as a blanket and tried to sleep.

could you please check my sentences? fairytale story It’s a story from decades ago. One day, starved tiger strolled down to the town. “Roar! Is there something to eat?” He mumbled while smacking his lips.   Ugh” A baby crying out loud came out from a house.  “Who’s that baby crying that much at night?” The tiger went into the garden of the house. “If you don’t stop crying, I’ll throw you away to the bear!” The voice from baby’s mom pitting her baby was heard.  “Ugh” But the baby didn’t stop crying.  “Phew. That’s so loud.” When the tiget was abut to get back ,while shaking his head, the mother said “If you don’t stop, then I’ll throw you away to the tiger!” “What? Baby to me? “ It pricked up it’s ears.  He took the sit in front of the room and sat.  ““Ugh” But the baby didn’t stop. “He doesn’t even afraid of me?” But the tiget didn’t want the baby stop because that would make his mom to throw his baby to the tiger. “Ugh” Tiger wore a smile face while hearing the baby crying.  “Yes! Cry more! Louder then you mother will throw you to me!” Then his stomach growled.  Tiger narrowed his eye and swallowed.  “Ugh Ugh” But even the baby cried a lot, his mother didn’t give the baby to the tiger.  “Phew, when will she going to give me?” Since the tiget set there long, his bottom got really cold.  He suddenly got up, exhausted of wationg. Then the baby’s mother said “Phew, Ok, here’s the Gotgam” Then the baby stopped crying as if he didn’t even cried.  “Oh? What was happening?” That made tiger’s eye opened round.  “Gotgam? How much afraid is it to make the baby stop?” He drew the giant monster. “Oh! Gotta sneak away!” He quickly hid in the barn.  Soon the black shadow approached to the barn.  “Maybe that would be the Gotgam” The tiger lied down and didn’t move. The shadow came close and groped tiger’s head. “I got caught?! ” He surprised and got up. “What a stupid cow!” The shadow quickly got on the back of the cow.  The shadow was the thief who came to still the cows.  “Roar! Don’t kill me! He thought the ghost called “Gotgam” rode on his back so he ran with all his might. “Ough!!1 why is this cow so burking?” He held the back tightly. Soon he found out that he’s on the back of the tiger. “What? is it a tiger? If I fall from jere, I would definitely get in to trouble” As the tiget gets faster, the thief caught tightly.  He ran and ran all night long and plunked down in front of a big tree with a hole in the middle.

could you check my sentences please? Long log years ago, there was a anchovy with shining skins in the deep, blue east sea. One day, the anchovy had a dream.  “It was a hilarious dream. What is going to be happening?  He tilted her head.  “Who can I ask to riddle out the meaning of my dream?” He swam along the ocean and asked to his friends, “Hey guys. Can you guys riddle out the meaning of my dream?” “What was your dream?” They concentrated. And had their ears flapped. But nobody could explain the meaning.  Suddenly, anchovy thought of the goby living in the West side of the ocean, who were known as a good dream reader.  “YES! ,Maybe goby will know I’ll write a letter to ask him to come to my place.”  He wrote a letter clearly and asked to halibut to hand over the letter to goby. “Can you deliver this letter to halibut? Ii can’t swim long distance.” “Ok , I’ll get back to you soon.” Since goby was also curious about the meaning of the dream, he left right away.  He swims from the East sea through the south sea to the West sea.  It was the long distance travel.  Finally , the goby met the halibut. “This is the letter semt to you from the anchovy.” After read the letter, halibut went on his way with the goby. “Thank you for coming.”  When the halibut arrived, anchovy waved his tail and welcomed.  “You would be hungry. Let’s eat something first.” Anchovy took some delicious, salty sweet foods. Halibut enjoyed the meal but anchovy didn’t appreciated to goby and ignored him, who delivered his letter on behalf of himself. “So you had the hilarious dream? ” Halibut asked to anchovy.  “Yes, in my dream , I flied up and down on the sky and suddenly fall down. I flowed to somewhere and my body got cold and soon got warmer and warmer.” Halibut listened with his shining eyes. The goby also came close and concentrated.  Halibut blinked his eyes and tilted his head and said  “It’s a dream you’ll be a dragon. Awesome!” “Being a dragon? Really?”  Halibut blinked his eyes and tilted his head and said  “It’s a dream you’ll be a dragon. Awesome!” “Being a dragon? Really?” Anchovy was so surprised with Halibut’s saying. Anchovy becomes a dragon? What an unbelivable, awsome it is!”

Can you check my English sentences? You and me can create a new world by starting to make good quality together. You and me can create a new world by focusing on making high quality together. You and me, only 'together' can create a new world by focusing on making high quality. can you chech above sentences please?