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Could you edit my short story?
Hi, I'm Asahi. I am now on the yellow ship and fishing in the river. I am used to trout fishing in America, but today is the first time in Japan. Can’t wait! I have a good time until I met strange fish...The Fish's details are as follows:1, He has only one eye. 2, He has flowers on his head.3, His body is red.4, He has a tail. I have never seen this kind of one before, so I tried Googling it. And I found a page about Japanese custom "Obon".
Now, I understand that I am in "Sanzu-no-kawa" and the opposite shore is the demon's world! What was worse, today's date is 8/15. I learned something new today! Thanks.
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What is the difference between the two sentences?
1. The boy that you met in the park yesterday is Tom.
2. Tom is the boy that you met in the park yesterday.
Thanks
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"My Future" Could you edit my English?
Hello, I am ASAHI SATO. Today, I would like to talk about my future dream; becoming a professor. First, let me show you three reasons: study, character, and flexibility. Then I will take a look at what I need.
The first reason is that I can pursue my interests; Modern-History in Japan. There are a wide variety of topics―politics, arm forces, foreign affairs, education, emperor, etc. Although single topic research is tough, we have to consider all the various factors together. If I become just an office worker, it is quite impossible to do that.
Secondly, one of the most exciting and responsible job in the world. In terms of education, sharing my knowledge and talking with eager students (like me) make differences to the next generation. Also, in research, it is like an adventure―Discover the truths through reading many documents and primary sources.
Thirdly, flexibility with schedule. I really want to decide when I work and go home. Not Just 9 to 5. I do not like wake-up early morning, nor be pushed onto a hellishly packed train. So, I will make a good timetable with office hours, research, field time, lectures, and meetings. Also, I can take a long vacation in summer and winter. It is awesome. Of course, this is a serious problem, junior or High school teacher hardly take it.
I have shown you why I want to be a professor with reasons, now let us look three steps.
First step: graduate from our university. I’m now second grade, and I have another two years still, so I am going to use my time effectively, for example, reading many books, meeting high-status people, and publishing a book.
Second step: earning a master’s degree. It is the first step on the long road to becoming a professor. Undoubtedly, most universities require a master’s degree at least to working there.
Third step: getting a job. During my educational process, I will participate in any available employment opportunities that build my teaching and researching experience. I am sure that lead to advance my career. Moreover, maintaining good academic and working relationships with other people can lead to a great job opportunity.
I have understood my future dream is a hard one while writing this essay. Also, many things I have to do, but I will never give up.
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My student question
Why do we spell Hawaii, not Hawai?
Why double"i" we need? I have no idea to answer his interesting question. Could you help me?
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1. Two years old
2. Two-year-old
What's the difference? Why we remove s from years?
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The book I recommend Could you edit it ?
Today, I'd like to recommend “Doraemon”, a famous Japanese manga series written by Fujiko F. Not to mention, this manga was read all over the world. The story revolves around a robotic cat named Doraemon, who travels back in time from the 22nd century to aid a young boy named Nobita. Let me show you how I love it.
Firstly, I have great sympathy for Nobita. He is usually foolish, uncoordinated, lazy, dimwitted, weak, frail, childish and bad at sports. In fact, he scores poor grades every time and his mother furious about it. We have the same feelings: I don't feel like doing anything. Yes, we tried too many tests. Of course, I have never scored zero on my exams.
Secondly, friendship. Nobita has four best friends; Shizuka, Gian, and Suneo. Let me describe step by step. Shizuka is a smart, kind and pretty girl and eventually becomes his wife in the future. Gian is a strong and little bit fat boy. He also frequently steals other children's toys under the pretext of "borrowing" them. Suneo is a rich child, mean, and Gian's minion. They do not hesitate to help each other when they are in trouble. Throughout the series, particularly the films, Gian gives strong support. I was moved to tears at their friendship.
Thirdly, Future tools; key item in this manga. Doraemon has a four-dimensional pocket in which he stores unexpected gadgets, which he gets from The Future Department Store. Even though these are fantastic, I really want to get is "Anywhere Door": a pink-colored door that allows people to travel according to the person who thinks. If I got it, I no longer need to ride a packed train, and not be late for school. By the way, Nobita usually arriving late to school, so, getting scolded by his teacher, and being teased by his classmates.
Sympathy, friendship, and excellent tolls: these are some of the reasons why I'm into “Doraemon”. I cannot imagine my daily life without these in my library. So, I recommend that you read “Doraemon”.
Thank you.
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Question:Can I say like this? thank you
Well, these are frequently asked questions, do you watch TV recently? and do we need TV truly?
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Could you edit it? My friend's essay "Do we need TV or not?"
I don't think I need a TV in my life. What do you think? I think my argument is biased, but please listen carefully.
First, in terms of the average viewing time per day, there was a decrease of about 9 hours in the 4 years from 2013 to 2017, and especially among teenagers, there was a decrease of about 30 hours. On the other hand, the amount of time spent online has increased by an average of about 23 minutes over the past 4 years, and by about 30 minutes among teens. This indicates that while the average amount of time spent watching TV has decreased, the average amount of time spent on the Internet has been increasing. In other words, they are more committed to the Internet than TV.
Next, when it comes to viewing costs, television has a definite downside. It is the payment of NHK broadcast reception fee. The owner of the TV pays about 24000 yen a year in advance for programs that it does not watch often, including BS broadcasts, but fees less than 20000 yen a year for a low-cost SIM card. Wi-Fi costs 7000 yen per year and you can use it as much as you want without worrying about data capacity. The initial cost is also significantly cheaper on the device, and the constant spending is clearly better on the net in terms of performance. It’s up to the individual to decide what to spend money on, but is it a smart choice to spend money on TV when it’s free to watch TV shows online?
From these two things, I declare that I don’t need a TV.
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LEGO I want you to edit
LEGO was originated in Denmark and it’s well known as a toy, but we believe it can use as an English education tool in Japan. Applying LEGO SERIOUS PLAY METHOD, which was created by Robert Rasmussen, who is a member of the LEGO company, for building a better business, we can get speaking ability. The differences between education of the past in Japan is 3-D, 100 percent of attendees, unlocking the human potential, hands-on minds-on approach, and having speech time equally. Only four steps; posting, construction, sharing, reflection, you can get the more speaking ability.
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