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Help me, Let's correct and add sentence for me
(It is myself introduction for my resume. so I want to correct and add sentence my writting)
I always keep my honestness. When I’m freshman, I found a briefcase. There is much money in briefcase. I can use lots of money, but I couldn’t. Because I think that honestness is very important in my life. If I work for UNIQLO, I will work based on honesty. So I will get a customer’s trust.
Since I was young, my parents teach me to earn allowance myself. I worked to clean up my room and dishes, and I received money to my parents. So I learned independent-mind. It was good effect for me. And I convinced that it will be a good effect for my career.
My strengths are positive and outgoing. I want to actively enjoy campus life. So I joined student’s union and be elected president of student’s union. I went to explore M.T and O.T place with my members. And we prepared whole union’s events. So we learned cooperation. While I experienced these active, I learned decision and executive ability. I think that I will perfectly work based on my strengths.
I want to have a variety of experience, so I went to study in china. But, I don’t think that study isn’t a whole of my life. So I planed that I make Kim-bab and sell it on the street. At first, I had trouble to sell item. Because chinese haven’t interest to it. But I don’t give up and worked really hard for it. I made free-sample stand and Xiangchai Kim-bab what is all of Chinese like vegetable.
It can do that Chinese interest Xiangchai Kim-bab. So I earned much money and be praised to Chinese. I will work based on these freshness, I will contribute to UNIQLO’s growth.
In 2005, UNIQLO’s store opened in korea. It gave freshness to me. I think that there are many kinds of design and color’s clothes. And it was cheaper than other store’s items. So I like UNIQLO. And it is very popular brand now. I usually hope that I will be a global person. I convinced that UNIQLO will make my dream. And I want to work for company’s growth. I’m applying for a position in VMD of sales support team. As I’m working VMD, I will work for our customer’s comfort. So I convinced that we give more comfortable shopping circumstance.
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Help me, Let's correct and add sentence for me
(It is myself introduction for my resume. so I want to correct and add sentence my writting)
I always keep my honestness. When I’m freshman, I found a briefcase. There is much money in briefcase. I can use lots of money, but I couldn’t. Because I think that honestness is very important in my life. If I work for UNIQLO, I will work based on honesty. So I will get a customer’s trust.
Since I was young, my parents teach me to earn allowance myself. I worked to clean up my room and dishes, and I received money to my parents. So I learned independent-mind. It was good effect for me. And I convinced that it will be a good effect for my career.
My strengths are positive and outgoing. I want to actively enjoy campus life. So I joined student’s union and be elected president of student’s union. I went to explore M.T and O.T place with my members. And we prepared whole union’s events. So we learned cooperation. While I experienced these active, I learned decision and executive ability. I think that I will perfectly work based on my strengths.
I want to have a variety of experience, so I went to study in china. But, I don’t think that study isn’t a whole of my life. So I planed that I make Kim-bab and sell it on the street. At first, I had trouble to sell item. Because chinese haven’t interest to it. But I don’t give up and worked really hard for it. I made free-sample stand and Xiangchai Kim-bab what is all of Chinese like vegetable.
It can do that Chinese interest Xiangchai Kim-bab. So I earned much money and be praised to Chinese. I will work based on these freshness, I will contribute to UNIQLO’s growth.
In 2005, UNIQLO’s store opened in korea. It gave freshness to me. I think that there are many kinds of design and color’s clothes. And it was cheaper than other store’s items. So I like UNIQLO. And it is very popular brand now. I usually hope that I will be a global person. I convinced that UNIQLO will make my dream. And I want to work for company’s growth. I’m applying for a position in VMD of sales support team. As I’m working VMD, I will work for our customer’s comfort. So I convinced that we give more comfortable shopping circumstance.
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I have a question !!!!!!!!!!!!!
um~
Do you know 'NONGSHIM' ?
It is big food company in south korea.
um
if you know that , I want know what do you think about 'NONGSHIM'
They made snack, ramen, and so on.
Can you tell me what do you think about that?
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hey~ I have a question
um~
Do you know 'NONGSHIM' ?
It is big food company in south korea.
um
if you know that , I want know what do you think about 'NONGSHIM'
They made snack, ramen, and so on.
Can you tell me what do you think about that?
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what is correct?
My family is 4people
My family are 4 people
what is correct?
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I feel full ~ 배불러
I ate 만두 and 라면
so I feel full
but ....... over eat...........
너무 많이 먹었다.
包死了
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english is very difficulty ....
I am study now english and chinese.
English writting and speaking very difficult...
我觉得汉语比英语比较容易。
아~~ 영어 어렵다 ㅠㅠ
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