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hi,this is one of my writing exercise,please help me to correct it ,thanks~~
What style of living do you prefer?
Over the past couple of years, the word “independence”has become a hot button across society. However, there is no consensus of opinions among people about whether young people should live with their parents.
Some people are of the view that they prefer to live with their parents. And there are two reasons for this situation can be listed as follows. For one thing, living with parents can be more convenient to their lives. They will have more free time to do what they want rather than do the housework, look after children or something else. For another, if the family members live together, the relationships will become more harmonious, and the parents also need be cared. And with the development of the ageing of the population, this tendency will be more and more serious.
There are,however, still some people who insist that they need independent life. On the one hand, they deeply believed they are adults, who should make a living by themselves and live independent. And this is the demonstration that they have grown up. On the other hand, they can seek greater freedom and get a place of their own, in which they can do whatever they want, make whatever friends they like. And they have enough chances to face the society by themselves, no matter what kind of experience they will have.
As far as I am concerned, I’m firmly standing on neither of them. Living with parents doesn’t mean totally lose freedom, and as similarly living independent doesn’t mean get completely benefits. I prefer a proper way to balance two of them. Maybe we can choose to live near our parents. When we need some freedom, we can stay in our space, while we need help, we are not far away from each other. In brief, there is no the best way for everyone, but the proper way, and the proper way is our own way.
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what's the differences among 미쳤어. 미치겠어. 미쳐다. when and how shall i ues,could you plz show me some examples,thanks~~~
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Wanna study abroad to Korean for postgraduate and the major is healthcare management.
Hello,i am a Chinese university student,and my major is healthcare management(위생관리).Recently ,i am thinking about studying abroad to Korean for postgraduate(연구생)next year.But i can 't find which university has this major,actually i don't want to change my major,because i 'm afraid if i get into a new major ,will hard to gratuated,after all, it's a new feild to me.So would you please search which university have postgraduate of healthcare management major for me?Thanks ~~
大家好,我是一名中国大学生,卫生管理专业。最近,在考虑明年去韩国留学研究生。但是我在韩国的大学找不到这个专业,事实上我并不想换专业,因为我怕一个新专业,会比较难毕业,毕竟对我来说那是一个新领域。所以想请大家帮帮忙,可以帮我找一下招收卫生事业管理的研究生的韩国的大学吗?谢谢~~
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Questo contenuto viola le linee guida della Comunità.17 novembre 2012
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tiredness and fatigue (please help me ~~thanks~) part 2
First, energy-sustaining snakes. Here gives us a little list.
Second, get exercise. You might feel too tired to exercise, but regular exercise will make you feel less tired in the long run and you’ll have more energy.
Third, lose weight. Lose weight and you’ll feel much more energetic.
Next, get enough sleep. Sleeping is the best way to restore vitality.
Then, reduce stress. Relax, just remember to relax, whatever relaxes you will improve your energy.
Moreover, talk about it. when shared,one happiness can be turned into two. One sorrow can be released when two people face it together.
In addition, cut out caffeine. Maybe you will feel temporary relaxation, but you will feel more tired later. Cutting out caffeine and use yourself to overcome tiredness and fatigue is the right way.
Meanwhile, drink less alcohol. Although a few glasses of wine in the evening helps you fall asleep, you sleep less deeply after drinking alcohol. The next day you’ll be tired.
And the last one is drinking more water. Sometimes you feel tired simply because you’re mildly dehydrated. Seven glasses of water a day, the good life you will have.
That’s all. Thanks for your attention. Hope everyone have a relaxing and energetic life.
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thank you very much~~
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tiredness and fatigue(please help me~~thanks) part 1
Good afternoon, everyone. First of all, thanks for my partners take such wonderful speeches to us. You may know a lot about health, and today my topic is tiredness and fatigue. We will learn it from 3 parts; they are what, why, and how. OK, let’s start it.
First of all, you maybe wonder what do tiredness and fatigue really mean, although different people has different opinions, here I search the definition in The Oxford English Dictionary. Just look at them.
Now, we have the first impression about tiredness and fatigue, but maybe a little abstract, don’t worry about it, tiredness is just tiredness, everyday you feel tired; it’s ordinary in our daily life. Sometimes you maybe wonder why I am tired all the time. Many reasons lead to them, and the professor gives us 3 main reasons that are physical causes of tiredness, psychological causes of tiredness, and lifestyle causes of tiredness. And like this picture, every main reason has some small branches. Just look at it.
Maybe at this time you also doubt that I sleep and relax or do something else like these to entertain ourselves, why do I still feel tired? Actually there are 7 energy stealers that you don’t know.
The first one is being a couch potato. Long time watching TV or using the computer, you will be lazier and lazier, and going to sleep.
Second, poor posture. Bad posture will make your muscle painful, no matter of stealing our energy.
Third, crash dieting. Your body will be poor efficiency because of crash dieting that hasn’t enough energy.
Next, cabin fever. A depressing environment will make you feel tired easier.
Then, sugary breakfast cereals. Sugary breakfasts will give you a quick surge of energy but your sugar levels will slump just as quickly a couple of hours later. That’s why you crash as you run out of energy.
And what’s more? Constant worrying. Useless worrying makes your heart rate and blood pressure rise, and your muscles tighten, leading to fatigue and aches.
The last stealer is exercising too much. Over exercising may not be good for your body to get enough relaxation.
All of these are gathering from our daily life, and easier to understand. The doctor also gives us 10 medical reasons, look at the screen.
Now we have known what, why, and the last W is how, how to deal with tiredness and fatigue? Should we have private doctor to deal with it? No, we can cure ourselves by following tips.
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sorry,please look at the second paper,this one is unavailable.
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우리 사랑헸잖아 这首歌
우리 사랑헸잖아 这首歌的原唱是谁,中文歌名是什么,韩文百度不到,谢了。就是2012韩国歌谣大赛中T-are演唱的那首,谢谢
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Questo contenuto viola le linee guida della Comunità.17 novembre 2011
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writing
(I'm preparing for my College English Test 6,please help my poor English,I need the corret grammer and the high score sentences.Thanks~~)
Working in a large morden city
It seems that in recent years,it's getting more and more difficult to get a satisfactory job,especially in those large morden cities.But most graduates still want to try their best to look for a job in large morden cities.
Some people believe that there are more chances in large morden cities than in small towns.In large morden cities, you will have more choices to choose different kinds of jobs.And it will bring you high earning,and it will be eaiser to kinds of jobs.And the life will be colorful if you live in large morden cities because of the all kinds of entertainments.
In my opinion,I think it is unnecessary for every graduates to work in large morden cities.Firstly,there are also some ways to improve your abilities in small town.It will be easier to get a job.Secondly,living in small town will be more peaceful,And this will be also benifit to our health.
So,different people have different opinions.But,the most important is weather you really enjoy your work,not where you work.
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looking for lyrics of two songs of 장근석(Jang Keun Suk)
"Victory" ,"Run Away"蓄势待发第一击"
In China ,many people love 장근석(Jang Keun Suk) because of 미남이시네요.He is very cool .
I''m looking for the lyric of Gotta Getcha.
Thanks
I can't find it in our Internet,please help me. I need Korean lyric.
If you are a Korean or anyone who learn well in korean but haven't listened the song,you can listen the song in http://music.qq.com/qqmusic.html?id=994239 , http://music.qq.com/qqmusic.html?id=994242
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