what's the difference between 'correct " modify"and "polish"? what's the diferent of these three word ?For example ,i have writen one artical ,I want someone can help to correct it .here only can use"corrct"or can use another word to instand of it .help me pls ,thanks a lot .

My funny monther Today ,when I was playing the cell phone ,had a movie about the superstar Yangyang,he is handsome and like a sunshine ,when he smiles ,I will follow to smile ,this is miracle.so I asked my mother come and saw with me togerther .when she saw it ,she said ":wow ,the boy looks so nice .""yes ,I think so ,why he looks so nice ,but that's the son of someone.why am I look like this ?" I replied.when the movie finished ,I closed it.this time ,you guess what's my mum said ?she said so nice boy you should look more longer time !haha ,this is my monther ,I'm sure ,you are really my mom.what's should I talk about this thing ?Nothing ,just think if yangyang to be my boyfriend ,I will smile even in the dream .

the first day to write something here today saw one artical ,the topic is the next 7 years ,who am i ? the artical cite one report which said if one to be professional person ,she /he needs to practice 10000 hours uninterrupted .if everyday cost 5 hours to learn ,300 days one year ,that means we need 7 years to get the ability .In terms of my own ,start learning English from Middle school .until now almost 16 years ,so long time ,still can not speak fluency English .feel so ashamed suddenly .I know where is the problem ,I haven't presisted in learning .and also have something wrong about myself,I cannot control my time and my mind well .anyway ,I know what's the biggest problem about myself .so from now on ,I need to change and presist in it . I hope the friends here can help me to modify the mistake here ,and also if anyone wants to learn Chinese ,I will try my best to help you .Tks.

one question

what's thing  you like to do  best ?

My plan Now I'm planning my time ,I prepare to resign my job and start my travel ,but that need big courage ,I have think over for a long time ,I need to give up my job now which seems good . Sometimes i'm think what's retard my step ?why i give up my primary dream ?always i can find some many reasns ,but this time I won't hasite,do the things i want from my heart ,I will go to india,tailand ,maldives ,span ,and so on ,take one year to go to the places i can ,I need believe myself ,i have that ability ,good luck to me!

the end of the world 35 mins will be the end of the world ,haha ,what should I do ,I guess maybe I should fall sleep ,becase sleeping is the best thing I like . These days I seldom on italk and skype ,haven't time and much busy .but I'm still alive ,hehe .thanks for my friends still remember me ,that's feel so nice .Unlucky ,my English haven't proved these days, but I guess my dance must better than before ,and I also cut down my hair, very short ,my friends said I look like a student now ,hahahahha um,don't know what's i want to say ,but I know what's i need to do now ,that's take a shower and fall asleep ,because if tomorrow is still as before ,I need to work as usual .

who can help me ? My english is poor ,I want to improve it ,especially oral english ,but I don't know how to do ,some kindly persons told me need find someone speak english together ,so that we can practice eveytime ,even if when I am working I need to speak english , but I feel my english so bad .who so kindly can help me ? I'm in haizhu district ,guangzhou ,China ,if you are also in guangzhou ,and want to learn chinese,we can help each other ,I have a rest on sunnday ,I believe with the help of each other ,we all can improve our language lever .Looking forward to hearing from you .

Though This month very busy ,and the time lost so fast ,I can't believe now is the end of the month .today I thougt i won't busy ,but when I hungry ,i realize now is 1pm ,I'm busy all the morning.Lucky ,this month my work goes well. Yesterday I want to write something ,but now Idon't know waht I want tot say ,also don't know how to start . I have the habit of writing diary ,I have finished three books ,all about my happiness and sadness ,little things ,big things ,what I saw ,what I thougt all in it .And also about the true me .Sometimes I want to post my diary to someone who I don't know him or her ,child ,woman ,man ,older ,any kind is ok ,we haven't seen each other before ,have't know each other .someday someone gets my diary ,she or he reads it ,know somewhere has this girl in the world ,at least someone can know me ,the ture one ,nobody know before . I don't want to give my mother or friends ,because have so many my sadness in it ,I don't want see them feel sad .they only need know me is a lovely and happness girl is ok . Maybe this thougt much crany,but I Always think about it .

annoying what's wrong recently?so many irritable things ,this serever months I'm very busy ,but that's no problem ,busy is good thing ,i can learn much and also can earn more money .but why all the things always changeable ,now I don't know how to do ,headache ，nobody can help me ,I still need deal with it by myself. cool down ,baby ,come on ,i believe you can do it well! I always alone ,go to work ,have lunch ,go back from work ,waiting the bus ,sometime I woule feel tired and sadness ,I need someone can hug me when I need courage .I waste some much time on waiting ,maybe I'm wrong ,accturely haven't this one I'm waiting ,maybe..... I want to find someone ,so that we can help and support each other ,I believe we can walk much relax and far . This time also have many trouble things need to ,but Tthis monment I want to the seaside ,hear the voice of the sea ,and the comfortable wind ,which all make me feel better . Stop here ,start working .