Particularly,both the percentage of A and B take up 7%,which is one third of C seperately Particularly,both the percentage of A and B take up 7%,which is one third of C seperately. I should put is or are after which

It is nice to get away from the hustle and bustle of city life and relax yourself? It is nice to get away from the hustle and bustle of city life and relax yourself a IELTS examiner told it is right to add to before the relax , It is nice to get away from the hustle and bustle of city life and to relax yourself so is it right?and why I think there is a to after the nice

this is my IELTS Writing.thanks IELTS Writing is assessed according to levels of task achievement, vocabulary, grammar and cohesive devices. title :Some people think that the government should pay for citizen’s health care and education. Others , however ,argue that is not the responsibly of the government . discuss both views and give your own opinion. In these day and age ,the guarantee of individuals’ health care and education has aroused people’ discussion . some people believe that it is definitely the duty of government. From my standpoint ,I agree with this view. Paying for people’s health care and education by government benefit citizenship to a large extent. To begin with ,every student could enjoy the right to go to school no matter the high tuition. The impoverished students can attend school to receive the education provided that the government will increase its support for pulic education. Similarly ,the needy can receive the medical service free which is beneficial to their health. Besides , government is obligated to increase their expenditure on citizens’ medical service and schooling. More preciously , individuals shoulder the responsibility to contribute to the development of the society and pay taxes to the national government. So it is free for them to receive the education and take the medical service. Last but not least ,the service will narrow the gap between the poor and the rich. By that I mean students raised in less fortunate households can acquire knowledge and techiniques at school which motivate them to change their destiny. This is probably ture to some extent . Admittedly,persons can pay for the health care and education by themselves . After all ,government can put more budget on other fileds . for instance, the service industry ,the manufacture etc. which make great profit to the national tax rather than education and health care. Even so ,the education and health care is the basic guarantee of citizenship which play the majority roles in the progress of the economy . In conclusion , government is obligated to take responsibility to assist people’s health care and education. But I still suggest that it is critical to control the part of national budget on these areas .

who want to join me to correct compositions with each other?

I am writing compositions everyday and I am finding a partner to correct my composition.Becasuse I am perparing IELTS(International English Language Testing System) now .

 

I think the native speaker who are learning Chinese may be better as I can help the one with his or her Chinese writing.

 

PS:I am a Chinese.

this is my IELTS Writing.thanks Hello everybody!I am preparing for the IELTS exam.IELTS is the International English Language Testing System which tests English proficiency across the globe. IELTS Writing is assessed according to levels of task achievement, vocabulary, grammar and cohesive devices. so I believe you can correct the mistakes in my writing part of the IELTS in the 4 band descriptions above.I will really appreciate. ok this is my composition: Title: International organizations should provide poor countries with technology and practical advice rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In these days and age, numerous international organizations offer assistance to impoverished nations. Some individuals argue that they should provide technology and practical advice rather than financial aid. From my standpoint ,I agree this view. The creation brought by assisting technology and practical suggestions are more profitable.To begin with, citizens in impoverished nations will create more profit. Specifically, receiving the help as they can use it to industry to create a great deal of profit in the future. However money is only cures in a short period. Besides,government in poor developing countries are supposed to shoulder their responsibility to help their contries change the situations. Therefore, scientists and engineers are obligated to associate the leading foreign technology with the developmental of their modern industry, which is also a beneficial opportunity to motivate the natives devoted themselves to contributing to the construction of industry. Even more importantly, receiving financial aid may cause corruption to some extent—that is to say most common people cannot enjoy the profit in most time. Besides,this result may cause a aggravated circulation created by feckless governmental officers. On the other side of the debate though some individuals harbor the notion that assisting financial aid may be a direct way to help the persons in poor countries. It seems true this way may be profitable in a short time. Even so, the poor countries may be dependable on the organization. In other words,it is not possible for poor countries to develop independently in the coming days. But I still suggest that this is also a indispensable part of the assistance . In conclusion, I believe helping them with modern technology and suggestions will better. obviously ,it is critical for government to deal with the assistance in poor areas and nations.

An Interview to University My name is XX and you can call me Leo.I’m doing electronic information engineering in Northwest Agriculture and Forestry University in China. I apply this major for 2 reasons.Firstly,the major’s arrangement is matched with my curriculum to a large extent.Secondly,Management caters for me a lot,and I’m into it and I believe it is fine to combine the management with the electricity. Actually,I have got X points on the IELTS exam.I practice speaking everyday and I am confident that I will get the 6.5 points on the IELTS exam. GPA:My GPA is kind of low which is X percent.But the academic record is increasing during the 3 academic years.Besides,I have published a paper on the international conference,which is collected in the EI database. In terms of internship,I got a short internship in ZTE enterprise which operates communication network in China and The leading global integrated communication solutions provider.On top of that,I participate in the SIFE global non-profit college students’ organization which stands for Students in Free Enterprises. By contributing their talents to projects that improve the lives of people worldwide, SIFE participants are demonstrating that individuals with a knowledge and passion for business can be a powerful force for change. PS:I wish you can add more and polish the article.

hi! I am good at Chinese and I am looking for a partner who speaks English well.

hi!

I am good at Chinese and I am looking for a partner who speaks English,I really want to improve my English speaking level.

we can help each other and I am sure we can be good friends!

Have a nice day!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself I'm from Hong Kong,China and I'm learning English now. So I'm glad to talk with u and exchange ideas about leaning laguanges and cultures as well. I'm studying English coz I want to study aborad. Nice to meet u !