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could somebody help to correct this? does is sound "idiomatic"? Sant Jordi Composition. Hey everyone, I’m Marisa, or Mario it depends on how I wake up every morning. It’s kinda funny if you think about it, and it makes no sense to people that don’t know me. Yeah, I know it sounds weird, but I don’t care, not anymore. When I was born my name was only Marisa because my parents thought that it was a pretty name for a girl, they assumed my gender only for my genitals and I don’t really blame them, normally people don’t feel they're a different gender every morning like me. Eventually, they realized that I wasn’t feeling right one of every four days. I didn’t like boys' typical toys occasionally or I didn’t like typical boys’ clothes every now and then. This wasn’t right for them at first because they thought it was their fault. It wasn’t. They tried all kinds of stuff, but nothing really changed except my mood. When I got to the age of 7 I started realizing how some things felt different on some days. Somehow, after a lot of psychology sessions with a lot of really qualified professionals they reached the conclusion that I didn't have a fixed gender within me and every day my gender could change. My parents at first thought that I would have such a bad time with all of this and they weren’t completely wrong about it. Some days I felt sad, confused, and wondered if someday all that stuff would go away. Those were only some days and that period has ended now I can publicly admit that I have accepted myself as I am without exceptions. Yeah... I mean, that was yesterday. Today I’m feeling kinda low, but everybody thinks I am in a perfect mood because of that damn text I wrote and posted to the walls of my high school.
2021年4月20日
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could you tell me is this composition has any mistake? There are always people who are born biologically of one gender, but feel identified with the other gender or with neither. This is the case of Oscar, biologically he is a girl (Mar), but over the years he realized that he was not a girl. It all started at school, people who didn't know her always referred to her in masculine terms, because they thought she was a boy, because of the way she dressed, the way she wore her hair short, the way she played soccer, etc. We always told people that she wasn't a boy but a girl, because when they told her she was silent, but one day she told us that it didn't matter, that they didn't need to say she was a girl, we were all surprised but we didn't ask her why. Everything went on as normal for a few years, people called her as a boy and she didn't say anything, until we reached 6th grade. The first day of school, we got to class, and the teacher started to call the roll, until she said Oscar's name, we turned to see if there was a new boy in the class, but no, she raised her hand and said: present. When she finished the roll call, she had Oscar come out to the board to explain everything that had happened over the summer, and he told us that he made the decision to change his gender because he felt he was a man instead of a woman. The first few days it was hard, as it was very strange, but eventually we got used to it. But not everyone, as there were people who laughed at him for that fact. Those people who laughed at him didn't know what he had been through, since he had been silent for many years, constantly putting up with people considering her a girl and not a boy, which is what she wanted. Throughout the course of ESO she had to endure many laughs and insults towards her, but there were also people who supported her, because as long as she felt good and did not bother anyone she was fine.
2021年4月20日
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Mein kleiner Aufsatz Ich habe ältere Eltern als die Mehrheit der Jungen Leute meiner Generation. Als ich geboren war, waren meine Eltern schon 40 Jahre Alt. Und Jetzt, dass ich beinahe 30 Jahre alt bin, werden sie bald das Rentenalter erreichen. Mein Vater befürchtet nicht das Moment, in dem er endlich Zeit für seine lieblings Sachen haben wird: er ist ein Mann mit vielen Hobbies. Trotzdem erfährt meine Mutter es ganz anders: sie hat für 40 Jahre lang als Lehrerin gearbeitet, was eine Grosse Menge von Energie fordert und sie ist davon überzeugt, dass sie sich ohne die Arbeit langweilen wird. Ich rate sie verschiedene Aktivitäten ausprobieren um ihre Interesse für neue Sachen zu wecken. Aber es ist nicht so einfach. Je älter man ist, desto geschlossener man wird. Sie hat den Versuch gemacht sich bei einem Tanzkurs anzumelden. Sie sagt, sie will diesen Aktivitäten den Vorzug geben, die in Bezug mit dem Körper sind. Sie sagt, dass mit ihrem Alter, man muss sich darum kümmern, den Körper zu bewegen. Ich bin sicher, dass meine Mutter sich die Mühe geben wird, um eine frohe Senior zu werden. danke In voraus
2016年1月22日
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このコンテンツはitalki Community のガイドラインに違反しています。2016年1月11日
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Mein kleiner Aufsatz Ich wohne seit einem Jahr in Brasilien. Trotzem wohne ich in Sao Paulo, eine der entwickelsten Städte Brasiliens, die als eine stressige Stadt gilt, und auch sie sich nicht an die brasilianische Tradition haltet. Manchmal bekomme ich das Gefühl, dass ich mich in USA befinde oder in irgendwelchem entwickelten Land. Aber ich habe mich bemüht, mit der Kultur in Kontakt zu sein und zum Beispiel, habe ich mich ich an einem Capoeira Kurs angemeldet. Capoeira weckte meine Interesse, weil es um ein Sport geht, das mit live Musik getrieben wird, und das macht mir viel Spass. Ich wollte andere Aktivitäten ausprobieren, aber ich trainiere 3 mal pro Woche und bleibt mir keine Zeit übrig. Ich bin zufrieden mit meiner Entscheidung, weil ich interessante Leute, die ihre eigene Kultur befördern, kennengelernt habe. Mit manche habe ich jetzt eine enge Verbindung und ich betrachte sie als meine brasilianische Familie. Danke im Voraus, wenn Sie das korrigieren können. Ich versuche mein schriftlisches Deutsch zu üben.
2015年12月4日
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short question could someone explain me the exact connotation of the sentence "you're quite the beauty to me"?
2015年10月19日
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o meu texto Gostaria de falar um pouco sobre minha rutina matinal. Eu acordo bastante cedo porque tenho mais energia de manha que de noite. Quando eu era estudante e tenha uma prova que precisava um esforço à mais, ia dormir cedo à noite e acordava na madrugada porque era quando eu sentia que minha cabeça estava mais disposta. Mais continuando a descrição da minha rutina matinal, eu acordo cedo e faço o meu café de manha. Eu gosto que seja assim bem completo. Acostumo a comer aveia com leite ou também canjica, uma torrada com manteiga com sal e por encima eu ponho mel, também tomo um expresso e uma fruta brasileira. Gosto de fazer tudo isso ao mesmo tempo que escuto à rádio. Se eu tenho tempo de fazer esse ritual, eu estou bem-humorada por todo o dia. Depois, eu vou para o conservatório para estudar musica que é o que eu estou fazendo no Brasil: eu sou intercambista numa faculdade de musica que abrange muitos estilos de musica. Mais eu fui para o Brasil na procura da MPb. Eu acho triste que muitas pessoas jovens aqui não conheçam os compositores e o repertorio essencial da musica brasileira. Na mesma faculdade, onde é suposto que as pessoas têm mais cultura musical que a média da população, eu me encontro com pessoas que só se interessam por a musica americana, alias, elas só ficam estudando standards de jazz americanos que são mais velhos que muitas musicas brasileiras famosas que apareceram depois. Eu acho que fazer isso é uma bobagem, porque fora do Brasil as pessoas admiram muito a musica brasileira e eles como músicos fariam mais dinheiro promovendo sua cultura de forma genuína que imitando a música americana. Eu fico a maior parte do meu tempo estudando no conservatório. Nas segundas e quartas faço capoeira para tirar a energia sobrante e ficar mais saudável. Cada dia janto na minha casa uma salada e omelete que é uma combinação que sempre se comeu na minha casa de criança. Falado assim, estou soando “certinha” demais, mais quando ser quer fazer muitas coisas num dia, a pessoa precisa de se organizar, não tem jeito .
2015年9月13日
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my little text I would like to give you a ride throughthout my daily routine. Best case scenario, I wake up early enough to prepare a delicious breakfast. As a spanish, I’m not used to prepare a big breakfast or to consider it as a main meal of the day, but since I lived in germany for half a year I like to follow this habit because I consider it healthier. I use to have oats with milk, toasted bread with salted butter with honey on it, an expresso and a fruit. Afterwards I usually have to rush to the conservatory. One of my other morning pleasures during the week is to listen to the radio while I’m preparing breakfast. This habit I have taken it from my father, whom I have seen doing this for decades. In my 15 minutes walk to the conservatory I like to listen to the music I’ve been saving on spotify. I cannot listen to music staying quiet! I know that sooner or later, when I settle down in a certain city, in all likelihood in my hometown Barcelona, I will have a dog and I would like to walk around with it while I listen to music. But without distracting me from my attempt of explanining my daily routine, I keep on explaining. I have classes during the morning. Then I walk fast home and have lunch that I usually have prepared before. I love soups, so there’s always a soup in my fridge. I specially like the rice and bean soup. I have learned to cook it here in Brazil, where I currently live. I like to have lunch reading newspapers and I also try to switch everyday between different press sources that I like from different countries. Later I come back to the conservatory to rehearse and study. On Monday and Wednesdays I’m doing some sports, to let the exceed of energy out and to get myself out of my mind. Then I can work better. I use to arrive late in the night and like to dinner a big salat with an omelette and a yoghurt, I never get bored of this combination, which my grandmother used to eat everyday also. In the mealtime is where I try out new dishes. Maybe it sounds a far too much organised routine, but if I don’t do it this way I don’t have time for all the things I like. Since I started studying music, I realised that I rather prefer a little bit of many things every day than to deal with a sole topic for long time in one only day.
2015年9月13日
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Mein kleiner Aufsatz Die Gegenwart bewundert und erstaunet uns. Die vergeht so schnell, dass wir den Eindruck haben, sie nicht gut verdauen zu können. Seit einigen Jahrzehnten her, die Welt bewegt sich hektisch; unser natürliches Verhältnis mit der Natur, oder die genannte “menschlische Proportion” wurde als “zu langsam” bezeichtnet und das wissen wir, weil wir mit Geräten umgegeben sind, die uns helfen, uns selbst zu beschleunigen. Meine Oma hatte nie eine längerer Stecke als 30km zurückgelegt, was dem Nachbardorf entsprach. Sie hatte immer die selbe Arbeit, als sie berufstätig war, und hatte für ihr ganzes Leben Intimität mit einem einzigen Mann. Sie machte kein hobbies, und ihr Alltag verlief ruhig, ohne Überlappung von Aktivitäten oder stress. Solche Gedanke kamen, als ich die Information auf dem Flugzeitticket nach Brasil las. Da stand, dass solche Strecke 1200 Tonnen am Co2 pro Passagier verursacht. Meine Frage lautet: bis wann werden wir masslos mit der Natur handeln? danke im Voraus wenn Sie das korrigieren!
2015年9月11日
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my little text To whom it may concern, I’m applying for the job of cultural manager since I consider that my profile meets the qualities for it, please find enclosed my CV. The job attracted me because it brings together the two sides of my education. I’m a musician and besides I have a degree on languages with a especialization in german studies. Currently I can work with the following five languages: spanish, catalan, german, english and portuguese, please find in my CV the corresponding language levels and certifications. In my previous professional experience, I have worked as a language teacher, tourist guide, and also as a musician. I would like to emphasize that for three years music was a full-time commitment, since I made up an acapella group that use to have an average of seventy concerts per year. This experience gave me the opportunity to observe from a close sight the artist’s scene. I was partly in charge of the promotion of the group, so I was often in contact with cultural enterprises and learned how to maintain a nice relationship with them. Summarizing and adding some other points to my application, I think I am suitable canditate because of following reasons: • I belong to a network of artist and can suggest good professionals for coming events • I have already worked promoting an artistic product, so I know the formalities and procedures that this kind of duty requires. • I have worked as a language teacher and tourist guide, which enhanced my communication and didactic skills. • I speak several languages and work on mantaining them actualized by reading articles that often deal with arts. • I have belonged to several music groups and I’m aware of the importance of being respectful with others and I enjoy to work in group. Thank you for considering my application and recieving my CV, both letters of recomendation and this short presentation. Please do not hesitate to contact me by phone and email. I am available for interview any time. I look forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully Marina Fabregas Curbelo thank you in advance if you correct it! this is an imaginary situation for a job application
2015年9月10日
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