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Jessie💞Isabella
I have been working all week. Now it’s time for me to rest this evening. I find that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing for me. So I went there and ate boiled Congee with meat and lettuce, fried rice noodles and red bean soup for dinner. After I got back home, I did laundry and picked up things. Then, I tutored my daughter to do a picture description in Chinese. She searched online and chose to write a description about the painting, Mona Lisa. She looked at the painting carefully and wrote about something I hadn’t (or-haven’t) never noticed before, for instance, Mona Lisa in the painting doesn’t have eyebrows!
2021년 6월 18일 오후 3:33
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I find
that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing for me.
Hi Jessie and Isabella,
I agree with the corrections my colleagues have already suggested. Just want to put my two cents in. I would rather say, 'I find eating in the cafeteria quite relaxing'. It sounds more fluent to me.
Hope this helps.
Warm greetings,
Anna
2021년 6월 19일
I have been working all week and now it’s time for me to rest this evening. I find that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing. So I went there and ate boiled Congee with meat and lettuce, fried rice noodles and red bean soup for dinner. After I got back home, I did the laundry and tidied up. Then, I tutored my daughter to write a picture description in Chinese. She searched online and chose to write a description about the painting, Mona Lisa. She looked at the painting carefully and wrote about something I hadn’t ever noticed before, for instance, Mona Lisa in the painting doesn’t have eyebrows!
2021년 6월 18일
I have been working all week. Now it’s time for me to rest this evening. I find
that eating in the cafeteria is quite relaxing for me. So I went there and ate
boiled Congee with meat and lettuce, fried rice noodles and red bean soup for
dinner. After I got back home, I did laundry and cleaned up things. Then, I
tutored my daughter to write a picture description in Chinese. She searched online
and chose to write a description about the painting, Mona Lisa. She looked at
the painting carefully and wrote about something I had never
noticed before; Mona Lisa doesn’t have eyebrows!
2021년 6월 18일
This was really good, the only issue is, after hadn't, you don't need to put the word "never". You can't say hadn't noticed.
2021년 6월 18일
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Jessie💞Isabella
언어 구사 능력
중국어(북경어), 영어, 이탈리아어
학습 언어
영어, 이탈리아어
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