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Hello English speakers! Could you please help me correct my interview answers? Thanks in advance for your help! I would like to share my experience of overcoming the difficulty I encountered during my internship at an advertising agency. Through the introduction of an alumni, I had an internship at an advertising agency, which was started by my senior in school. I worked as an account executive intern, mainly responsible for the advertising of some company's products on social media platforms involving part of the planning and actual execution process. I was able to get started very quickly in the initial training on the basic skills of account executives, workflow, proposal writing, and software operation, and I also got the first place in the training. However, I encountered a major challenge in the actual process of working - brainstorming a one-sentence communication copy for the product. This was a big challenge for me as I had no experience in one-sentence copywriting. When I first started brainstorming, I often had no idea or came up with a rustic copy. After the first brainstorming session, I realized I had to make some effort to change these things. I asked my leader, my creative colleagues, for advice, and searched the Internet for relevant knowledge. Before the next brainstorming session, I had a comprehensive understanding of the product, a detailed understanding of the competition, and also went to Little Red Book and Weibo to search for other common copies for social platforms to understand the platform style. After one brainstorming session, I found that I could actively participate in the discussion and some ideas were adopted. Through this experience, I realized that interest is the best teacher, and that the ability to learn quickly allows me to take on jobs that I am not familiar with. Most importantly, the experience of overcoming copywriting challenges in this interdisciplinary internship made me more determined to pursue a career in marketing.
2021년 10월 3일 오후 4:10
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I would like to share my experience of overcoming a difficulty that I encountered during my internship at an advertising agency. Through an alumni introduction, I gained an internship at an advertising agency, which was started by my senior at school. I worked as an Account Executive intern, mainly responsible for the advertising of company products on social media platforms including part of the planning and all of the actual execution process. I picked things up very quickly during the initial training on an Account Executive's basic skills, workflow, proposal writing, and software operation. I also got the first place in the training. However, I encountered a major challenge in the actual process of working - brainstorming a one-sentence communication copy for the product. This was a big challenge for me as I had no experience in one-sentence copywriting. When I first started brainstorming, I often had no idea or came up with a rustic copy. ("rustic" - interesting choice, can you explain it to me a little bit please?) After the first brainstorming session, I realized I had to be proactive to solve this issue. I asked my leader & creative colleagues for advice and searched the Internet for relevant knowledge. Before the next brainstorming session, I had a comprehensive understanding of the product, a detailed understanding of the competition, and also went to Little Red Book and Weibo to search for other common copies for social platforms to understand the platform style. After that brainstorming session, I found that I could actively participate in the discussion and some ideas were adopted. Through this experience, I realized that curiosity is the best teacher and that the ability to learn quickly allows me to take on jobs that I am not familiar with. Most importantly, the experience of overcoming copywriting challenges in this interdisciplinary internship made me more determined to pursue a career in marketing. (why did it make you more determined?)
Hey Cynthia, happy to help :) I was a Recruiter for in London & Bangko for 6-7 years. If you would like to practice together then send me a message :) We don't have enough space here and other people have already corrected the text but overall I like the structure and think we could make some big improvements together for this & other questions :)
2021년 10월 4일
I would like to share my experience of overcoming the difficultied I encountered during my internship at an advertising agency. Through an introduction by a former student, I gained an internship at an advertising agency, which they had started. I worked as an account executive intern, mainly responsible for the advertising of some of the company's products on social media platforms. I was involved in part of the planning and the actual execution process. I was able to learn very quickly the initial training on the basic skills of account executives, workflow, proposal writing, and software operation, and I also got the prize for first place in the training. However, I encountered a major challenge in the actual process of working - brainstorming a one-sentence communication copy for the product. This was a big challenge for me as I had no experience in one-sentence copywriting. When I first started brainstorming, I often had no idea or came up with a rustic (I don't know what you mran here - simple?) copy. After the first brainstorming session, I realized I had to make some effort to change these things. I asked my leader and my creative colleagues, for advice, and searched the Internet for relevant knowledge. Before the next brainstorming session, I had a comprehensive understanding of the product, a detailed understanding of the competition, and also went to Little Red Book and Weibo to search for other common copies for social platforms to understand the platform style. After one brainstorming session, I found that I could actively participate in the discussion and some of my ideas were adopted. Through this experience, I realized that interest is the best teacher, and that the ability to learn quickly allows me to take on jobs that I am not familiar with. Most importantly, the experience of overcoming copywriting challenges in this interdisciplinary internship made me more determined to pursue a career in marketing.
Very good, but remember when speaking we tend to use simpler language.
2021년 10월 3일
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