Can you please tell me if there are any changes to make? I'm going for a casual conversational style. Many thanks!
- After walking 20 minutes in the heat to the office, I hoped to get some water from the water cooler, but there wasn't any.
- I made plenty of food for my guests, but none of them liked it. I will try a different menu next time.
- She didn't want to sell her classic car, and no offer could change her mind. Her car was really precious to her.
- I've written down some ideas, but they're not in my Google Docs—they're on paper.
- None of the organizers invited him to the event, but he went anyway.
- This band used to visit this country often, but they haven't held a concert here since 2007.
- The white ceramic floor got so dirty that no cleaner could get it completely clean.
- No wonder you're feeling stiff now. You haven't stretched all day and have been sitting in front of the computer for hours.
- There's no way she's going to fail the college entrance exam. I know for a fact that she's been studying like crazy.
- I asked a snack bar seller in the park where the minizoo was, and he told me he had no idea—perhaps he was upset that I didn't buy anything and didn't want to tell me.