Ellie
I am going to describe a time when I needed to search for consumers' feedback on a new product launch. It was two months ago when my boss asked me to finish a report about our new product includes its business performance and consumers' feedback. As for the business performance, I could analyze it with company's data, but for consumers' feedback I have to investigate our consumers. Due to the time limit, I searched for consumers' feedback on different social media platforms because our targeted consumers are mainly 20 to 30 year-old who use those social media platforms a lot. Thus it's totally fine for me to search for consumers' feedback online instead of finding consumers offline in a short time.
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26 mar 2023 11:24
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"I am going to describe a time when I needed to search for consumer feedback on a new product launch. It was two months ago when my boss asked me to complete a report about our new product, including its business performance and consumer feedback. For the business performance, I analyzed the company's data, but for consumer feedback, I had to investigate our consumers. Due to the time limit, I searched for consumer feedback on different social media platforms, as our target consumers are mainly 20 to 30 years old who use these platforms frequently. Therefore, it was appropriate for me to search for consumer feedback online instead of finding consumers offline in a short amount of time."
The original text had a few minor errors in punctuation and capitalization, which I corrected in the corrected version. The corrected version uses "consumer feedback" instead of "consumers' feedback", as "consumer" is an adjective in this case, describing the type of feedback being sought. The corrected version clarifies that the search for feedback was done on social media platforms due to the target audience and time constraints.
26 marca 2023
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