Search from various angielski teachers...
Angie
A young woman returns to her home by walking at night after a long work day. While she is walking, she thinks of her cat and cannot wait to hug it. During her childhood she didn't like pets, but after her moving abroad, she saw how somebody went to dump a little cat in a dark and durty street, so she couldn't stand it and she steped in. Now she is happy because her cattie keeps her company as she doesn't get to used to loneliness.
5 sty 2025 00:12
Poprawki · 3
1
A young woman returns to her home by walking at night after a long work day. While she is walking, she thinks of her cat and cannot wait to hug it. During her childhood she didn't like pets, but after she moved abroad, she saw someone dump a little cat in a dark and dirty street. She couldn't stand it and had to step in. Now she is happy because her cat keeps her company - as she just couldn’t see getting used to being alone.
Good job Angie. I got rid of some excessive words
5 stycznia 2025
Chcesz robić postępy szybciej?
Dołącz do społeczności uczących się i wypróbuj darmowe ćwiczenia!

Nie przegap okazji, by nauczyć się języka w zaciszu własnego domu. Przejrzyj naszą ofertę doświadczonych korepetytorów i zapisz się na pierwszą lekcję już teraz!