Hello all. I wrote a brief paragraph. Could you give me feedback? Thank you so much. Being a woman, I feel a certain pressure to dress well. Not wanting to sound sexist, but unlike my male colleagues. I feel I have to wear something different every day to the office. I think most women do, generally speaking.

Hello guys. Could you give me feedback, please? Thank you. Chores were much harder for our grandparents' generation. I mean, my grandmother not only washed everything by hand but also hung it out to dry. They have neither the luxury nor convinience of all our labor-saving devices. I'd love a robot that can either coor or clean. I think chores are both boring things and a waste of time.

Hello all. I wrote a brief review of the murmur of bees. Could you take a look at it? Thank you for your time. A short but beautiful novel, the murmur of bees is set in Linares, México during the Civil War of the 1910 and other events such us spanish flu. It tells the story of Simonopio who was found alone under a bridge by family Morales, whose members are rich people, when he was only a baby. Simonopio grew up and became a compasionate and caring child who is an important member of the family now. Also, Simonopio has cleft palate, and this malformation don't allow him to comunicate well. Consequently, he is a victim of the terrible, if not at times evil, ignorance of the period. Throughout the novel, Simonopio realize that he has special, supernatural skills. For example, he can see or feel the future, but these skills constantly torture him. The story is moving, or even poignant, with thought-provoking events.

Hello all. I wrote a small essay. If you want to give me feedback, I will really appreciate it. My personal achievement goal is to be a professor because I enjoy teaching people and I’m extremely skilled at it. Also, I love doing research and writing scientific articles. I have experience in teaching and training people where I work for. My materials, lectures, and so on are effective in order to develop their skills. Furthermore, I have written some papers in journals. There are two main requirements to be a professor: master’s degree and high score in TOEFL IBT. Consequently, I plan to study for a master’s degree this year, and I’m going to take a english course. In conclusion, it has always been a dream of mine to be a great professor. With skills that I already have as well as courses I want to take in the future, I know that I will achieve this goal.

Hello all. I wrote the introduction for an essay. Let me know your feedback, I will really appreciate it. There are three abilities and skills that help me to achieve my goals of life. First, I’m extremely good at solving problems by using quality theory because any problem can be solved by finding the root cause. Second, I have excellent communication skills since I can explain complex concepts, ideas, and so on. Third, I can learn any subject quickly so that I’m constantly studying new topics in my field. Together, I think these skills will enable me in order to be a happy and successful person.

One person that inspires me is Marie Curie because she demonstrated that a woman can be exceptional in science and improve the world. She was an extremely brilliant student and obtained mathematics and physics degrees, even though she was persuaded not to continue with high education because of her gender. In addition, being part of academic society in Poland was difficult, so she moved to Paris where she developed her research and married Pierre Curie. She worked with Pierre Curie and Henri Becquerel in the phenomenon of radiation. As a result of their research, they discovered two elements: Polonium and Radium and they were awarded with the Nobel Prize in Physics. Consequently, she became the first female Nobel Laureate. Years later, she won a second Nobel prize in chemistry. She is the only person who has been awarded nobel prizes in two different sciences. Marie Curie’s revolutionary research has helped humanity. Her research is the basis of development of medicine, oncology, and nuclear physics. In conclusion, Marie Curie is a great inspiration because of her research, her nobel prizes, and her contributions to the world despite obstacles.