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Dear Mr. Collins,
there are some problems. I find some difficult to do my work.
I work in an open-plan office which I share with a number of colleagues, but open-plan office brings problems. I can't concentrate on my work because of there are some background noise created by my colleagues. There are a chatting, ringing, slamming a door and others. I don't hear my own thoughts in this chaos. It pressure on me. I need repeat questions to our clients, and eventually they don't hear me.
I have a solution how fix that problem. I think it would be better if I work at home where I can pull weight to reach company's goals without efforts. What do you think of a remote job for me?