Please help me correct my essay if you see any mistakes in there! Thank you every much Do you have always feel some kind of we loss the direction of future .that we do the same thing ,see the identi

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Please help me correct my essay if you see any mistakes in there! Thank you every much Do you have always feel some kind of we loss the direction of future .that we do the same thing ,see the identical view and eat similar dish like routine everyday. But consider about the issue from another perspective .if we have splendid life each day .as time pass maybe one day we will be feel bring ,will not you? Why I conceive reason today? As we usually eat five dish and one soup for lunch . But today it’s unbelievable that the chief prepared pizza for us .let me so curious so I deeply investigated for this thing .finally ,I get the answers .because vacation will be coming (that from middle of January to February )we have extra funding that can use it at food. As result we order 12inch pizza be our bonus and equal distribution of pizza among all students everyone can get three piece of pizza .Despite the fact that there are few in number ,I was already satisfied with meal.after all happiness is being able to eat isn’t it ? Sure enough ,the surprise alway hind in our life

17 янв. 2023 г., 12:01

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Please help me correct my essay if you see any mistakes in there! Thank you very much. Do you always feel that we kind of lose the direction of future? That we do the same things, see the identical views and eat similar dishes like a everyday routine. Consider the issue from another perspective. If we have a splendid life each day, as time passes by, ( maybe one day we will be feel bring ,will not you? Why I conceive reason today?) > (I'm not sure about what you meant here) As we usually eat five dishes and one soup for lunch . But today it’s unbelievable that the chief prepared pizza for us. He made me so curious so I deeply investigated this matter . Finally i got the answers. Because vacation will be coming (From middle of January to February ) we have some extra funding that we can use for food. As a result, we ordered 12inch pizza to be our bonus and we will be equally distributing the pizza among all students so that everyone can get three pieces of pizza. Despite the fact that it was few, I was still satisfied with the meal. After all, happiness is being able to eat, isn’t it ? Surely, the awe always hind in our life.

The message in some part wasn't clear to me but I did my best to make the best intepretation and correction without changing the original, hope it was helpful.

17 января 2023 г.

Please help me correct my essay if you see any mistakes there! Thank you very much Do you have feel some kind we lose the direction of the future .that we do the same thing, see the identical view and eat similar dish-like routine every day? But consider the issue from another perspective. if we have splendid life each day . as time passes maybe one day we will be ffeelingwwelll not we? Why do I conceive reason today? As we usually eat five dishes and one soup for lunch. But today it’s unbelievable that the chef prepared pizza for us .let me be so curious so I deeply investigated this thing. finally, I got the answers .because vacation will be coming (from the middle of January to February )we have extra funding that can use for food. As result, we order The 12-inch pizza is our bonus and equal distribution of pizza among all students everyone can get three pieces of pizza. Even though there are few, I was already satisfied with the meal. after all, happiness is being able to, eat, isn’t it? Sure enough, the surprise always hind in our life

17 января 2023 г.

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