Abdullah B
Cities and villages, which one do you like the most and why? Rural life against urban life. One of the hot topics in our conversations and, we always bais to the villages but we just saying the says and don't do the does. Living in the village is a cute boring and, living in the cities is a necessary evil. Living in a rural place such as a village is really beneficial for our souls. Life is simple, natural, not influenced by the capitalism atmosphere which is quite remarkable in the cities. Also, people are honest, sharing sympathy with others, when you communicate with them you feel like you are one of their family. While living in the city is complicated, unhealthy, you feel like you are racing the time, you live in a mess of everything around, can't breathe for a moment. Also, People seem stressed in the cities influenced by the capitalism in their life, you can notice it in their personalities, how they make deals, how they just care about their own sake, with no sympathy to others and I don't talk here about strangers even their neighbour door by door. Despite all of that, most of the people live in the cities. because it's the centre of economy and business. I, myself, hate cities but I dream to build a start-up and, I love villages but might get bored if I lived there permanently. So I think the fair solution is to live in a village nearby City so I can enjoy the pleasures both of the city and the village and go for my dreams.
22 июня 2021 г., 7:00
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Cities and villages, which one do you like the most and why? Rural life against urban life. It’s a hot topic in our conversations nowadays and, we are always biased towards liking villages but we just say what we want to but don't do what we speak and as it’s said “ action speaks louder than voice”. Living in a village is a quite boring and living in a city has become a necessity in this century. Living in a village is really beneficial for our souls. Life is simple, natural and not influenced by the capitalist atmosphere which is quite evident in the cities. Also, people in villages are honest, sympathetic. While living in a city is complicated, unhealthy, you feel like you are racing time, your life and everything around is kind of a mess, it’s hard to breathe for a moment. You can notice it in their personalities,in the way they make deals, how city people just care about their own self, with no sympathy towards others and, I am not talking here about strangers but also about the neighbours living next door. Despite all of that, most of the people live in cities because it's the centre of economy and business. I, myself, hate cities but, I dream to build a start-up and, I love villages but might get bored if I lived there permanently. So, I think the fair solution is to live in a village nearby a city so that I can enjoy the pleasures of both city and village and go for my dreams.
22 июня 2021 г.
Cities and villages, which one do you like the most and why? Rural life against urban life is one of the hot topics in our conversations and we are always biased against villages but we just saying the says and don't do the does.(I didn`t get what you meant. Did you mean "we are all words and no actions"?) Living in a village is a little boring and living in the cities is an absolute evil. On one hand, living in a rural area such as a village is really beneficial for our spirit. Life in a village is simple, natural, and not influenced by the capitalist atmosphere which is quite remarkable in the cities. People are also hones, they show sympathy with others, and when you communicate with them you feel like you are a member of their family. On the other hand, living in a city is complicated, unhealthy, chaotic, a constant race against time, with not a spare moment to catch a breath.* Moreover, people seem stressed out in the cities because of capitalism. You can notice this in their personalities, in the way they make deals, the way they just care about their own benefit with no sympathy to others, and I am not talking about strangers, even to their next door neighbors. Despite all these, most people choose to live in cities because it's the center of economy and business. I myself hate cities but I dream to build a start-up and I love villages but might get bored if I lived there permanently. So I think the fair solution is to live in a village nearby a city to be able to enjoy the pleasures of both the city and the village and go after for my dreams.
* Here I reordered the sentence and replaced some words and phrases to make it sound more natural.
23 июня 2021 г.
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Abdullah B
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арабский, арабский (диалект Персидского залива), арабский (литературный), английский, малайский
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арабский (литературный), английский