I’m from Brazil, and I live in the countryside of São Paulo. The name of my city is Piracicaba and its population is about four hundred thousand habitants, and it’s a beautiful city full of flowers an

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Marta Santos

I’m from Brazil, and I live in the countryside of São Paulo. The name of my city is Piracicaba and its population is about four hundred thousand habitants, and it’s a beautiful city full of flowers and charms! There is a famous river in my city which has the same name of the city and it is the main tourist spot with great food, grilled fishes and enjoyable environment. I’ve been living here since I born, and I really love it so much, but still , I would like feel the experience of living in a different city or another country someday!

9 сент. 2021 г., 2:23

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I’m from Brazil, and I live in the outskirts of São Paulo. The name of my city is Piracicaba and its population is about four hundred thousand inhabitants. It’s a beautiful city full of flowers and charms! There is a famous river in my city which has the same name and it is the main tourist spot with great food, grilled fishes and enjoyable environment. I’ve been living here since I was born. I really love it so much, but still , I would like to experience living in a different city or another country someday!

Very good writing. Try not to have too many ands. Shorter sentences are clearer. Very long sentences are often confusing. I hope your dream will come true some day!!!

9 сентября 2021 г.

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