On this weekend, I will go to the water park with my friends and we will enjoy it and I will buy a new clothes and go to cinema hall for watching a movies. After that I will go to Mughal garden with m

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DEEPIKA SINGH

On this weekend, I will go to the water park with my friends and we will enjoy it and I will buy a new clothes and go to cinema hall for watching a movies. After that I will go to Mughal garden with my family.

6 мая 2022 г., 15:54

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This weekend, I will go to the water park with my friends and we will enjoy it. I will buy new clothes and go to the cinema / the movie theatre to watch a movie. After that I will go to Mughal garden with my family.

Hey Deepika! Good effort on this description. When we say this/last week/month/year/etc, we don't also use 'on'. Secondly. be careful not to use 'and' many times in one sentence. It doesn't sound very good in English. The rest is hopefully self-explanatory. Have a good weekend!

6 мая 2022 г.