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I would appreciate a lot if someone can correct my homework! Thank you in advance ;) TOPIC: You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain: -why are you selling, -describe the furniture, -suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture. Dear Marko, We haven’t been in touch for a while… First of all I would like to ask you how are you, how is your family? What is new in your life? I have some news, good ones this time… I suppose that you heard from our friends that I moved from my apartment in Sarajevo and I bought a big and beautiful house in Mostar. New house – new decorations like it supposed to be. Now I have a lot of furniture that I don’t use now since it doesn’t fit in new environment, and I decided to sell it. I am not selling much stuff: one bedroom couch (big, cozy, 220cm*180cm, made of wood, without any damage) and one closet (also made of wood, from store Jysk, two doors, five shelves and two drawers, 200cm height). Since I am on terrain very often I suggest you to come to see the furniture in my house just after the holidays, maybe on 15th of March. Looking forward to see you! Sincerely yours Milan.
20 февр. 2024 г., 19:36
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Thank you very much!
21 февраля 2024 г.
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I would say "Now I have some furniture that I can't use in the new house". It's perhaps not logically correct, but it's how we talk about such choices.
21 февраля 2024 г.
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“News” is an uncountable noun, not a plural noun, so “I have some news, good ONES” is an error. You could say “I have some news, but it’s good news this time” Another small error: like it is (or “it’s”) supposed to be
21 февраля 2024 г.
Oh, and if I'm understanding what you mean at the end, that should be"Since I'm home often... "
21 февраля 2024 г.
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Davor 😎 💂‍♂️⚽️🎯
Языковые навыки
боснийский, хорватский, английский, немецкий, греческий, черногорский, сербский
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английский, немецкий