Hello guys. Could you give me feedback, please? Thank you. Chores were much harder for our grandparents' generation. I mean, my grandmother not only washed everything by hand but also hung it out to

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Hello guys. Could you give me feedback, please? Thank you. Chores were much harder for our grandparents' generation. I mean, my grandmother not only washed everything by hand but also hung it out to dry. They have neither the luxury nor convinience of all our labor-saving devices. I'd love a robot that can either coor or clean. I think chores are both boring things and a waste of time.

27 февр. 2021 г., 13:02

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Hello guys. Could you give me feedback, please? Thank you. Chores were harder for our grandparents' generation. I mean, my grandmother not only washed everything by hand but also hung them out to dry. They had neither the luxury nor convinience of all our labor-saving devices. I'd love a robot that can either Cook or clean. I think chores are both boring and a waste of time.

27 февраля 2021 г.

Hello guys. Could you give me feedback, please? Thank you. Chores were much harder for our grandparents' generation. I mean, my grandmother not only washed everything by hand but also hung it out to dry. They have neither the luxury nor convenience of all our labor-saving devices. I'd love a robot that can cook or clean. I think chores are both boring and a waste of time.

Overall very good with only a few minor details. Other than the few spelling issues the grammar was actually technically perfect, I changed it slightly just to make it sound slightly more fluent.

27 февраля 2021 г.

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