I really want to go on a trip abroad now. I don't have any plans, but I want to go this year or next year. Where do you want to go? I want to go to Taiwan, Thailand, Korea, Spain in Europe, and the Un

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I really want to go on a trip abroad now. I don't have any plans, but I want to go this year or next year. Where do you want to go? I want to go to Taiwan, Thailand, Korea, Spain in Europe, and the United States and Australia in Asia. I want to go to various countries, eat a lot of delicious food, and interact with various people. I need money and time.

3 июля 2023 г., 23:12

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I really want to go on a trip abroad now. I don't have any plans, but I want to go this year the next. Where do you want to go? I want to go to Taiwan, Thailand, Korea, Spain in Europe, the United States, Australia and in Asia. I want to go to various countries, eat a lot of delicious food, and interact with A wide array of people. I will need money as well as time.

Not too much wrong with what you've done but just giving you a different way of writing more stylistically and efficiently in places. Hope it helps :) Ciao L

4 июля 2023 г.

I really want to go on a trip abroad now. I don't have any plans, but I want to go this year or next year. Where do you want to go? I want to go to Taiwan, Thailand, and Korea in Asia, Spain in Europe, the United States, and Australia. I want to go to various countries, eat a lot of delicious food, and interact with various people. I need money and time.

Good job. Notes: I moved "in Asia" after the Asian countries (ending with Korea), since the US and Australia are not in Asia. Safe travels!

4 июля 2023 г.

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