wendy
According to my experiences, children tend to be the people who their parents are during their childhood. If their parents are positive and diligent, they are probably thriving. On the other hand, children might be undisciplined with two nagative and lazy parents. We always say that parents are the first teachers in each child's whole life. They rely on their parents and want to be better with their parents' help. This is just like a little tree which needs to be taken good care of. When it grows up to be a big tree, it can stand up in storms. As for parents, we also need to give them a good condition to grow up. A good condition doesn't consist of money, big house and cars. It's a good atmosphere with a pair of parents who try their best to change themsleves to be better. If they become better, there is no doubt that their children can be better , too. So, I think that parents are the best gift for their children, if they are good enough!
6 янв. 2025 г., 3:48
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According to my experience, children tend to become like their parents during their childhood. If their parents are positive and diligent, the children will probably thrive. On the other hand, children might become undisciplined if they have two negative and lazy parents. We always say that parents are the first teachers in a child's life. Children rely on their parents and want to improve with their parents' help. This is like a little tree that needs to be taken care of properly. When it grows into a big tree, it can stand strong in storms. For parents, we also need to give them a good environment to grow in. A good environment doesn't mean money, a big house, or cars. It means a positive atmosphere with parents who try their best to improve themselves. If parents become better, there is no doubt their children will become better too. So, I think parents are the best gift for their children, as long as they are good enough!
7 янв. 2025 г., 1:35
According to my experience, children tend to be like their parents were during their childhood. If their parents were positive and diligent, their children are probably thriving. On the other hand, children might be undisciplined if raised by two negative and lazy parents. We always say that parents are the first teachers in each child's life. They rely on their parents and want to be better with/thanks to their parents' help. This is just like a little tree/ a sapling which needs to be taken good care of. When it grows up to be a big tree, it can withstand any storm. As for parents, we also need to give our children the best conditions to grow up. A good condition doesn’t consist of money, a big house and cars, it's a good atmosphere with a pair of parents who try their best to change for be better. If they become better, there is no doubt that their children can be/become better too. So, I think that parents are the best gift for their children, if they are good enough!
6 янв. 2025 г., 9:12
According to my experience, children tend to be the people who their parents were during their childhood. If their parents are positive and diligent, they are probably thriving. On the other hand, children might be undisciplined with two negative and lazy parents. We always say that parents are the first teachers in each child's life. They rely on their parents and want to be better with their parents' help. This is just like a little tree which needs to be taken good care of. When it grows up to be a big tree, it can remain standing during storms. As for parents, we also need to give them a good environment in which to grow up. A good environment doesn't consist of money, a big house and cars. It's a good atmosphere with a pair of parents who try their best to change themselves to be better. If they become better, there is no doubt that their children can be better, too. So, I think that parents are the best gift for their children, if they are good enough!
6 янв. 2025 г., 5:57
From my experience, children tend to be a reflection of their parents during childhood. If their parents are positive and diligent, the children are probably thriving. On the other hand, children might be undisciplined if their parents are undisciplined and lazy. There's an old expression that says parents are the first teachers in a child's life. Children rely on their parents and tend to do better with help from their parents. Like a little tree that is well cared for, when it grows to become a full-grown tree, it can withstand storms. As for parents, we also need to give them a good environment to grow up in. A good environment doesn't necessarily consist of money, big houses, and cars. A healthy atmosphere is when parents try their best to change themsleves for the better. If they improve, there is no doubt that their children will improve as well. To sum up, I think that parents are the best gift for their children- if they are good enough!
Very nice thoughts Wendy! Good job! I rewrote your piece but tried to stay true to the spirit of what you're saying. I changed "condition" to "environment." I felt that was a more appropriate word.
6 янв. 2025 г., 5:03
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