This is Le jardin du Luxembourg, in Paris 5th arrondissement. I took this picture yesterday while walking a bit because of the second time lockdown in France. It was a chilly but sunny day, and I lo

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This is Le jardin du Luxembourg, in Paris 5th arrondissement. I took this picture yesterday while walking a bit because of the second time lockdown in France. It was a chilly but sunny day, and I loved every part of it ! Do you know this place ? Have you ever been there ? (Please correct me if I made a mistake in english 🙂)

5 нояб. 2020 г., 21:45

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This is a photo of the Luxembourg Gardens, located in Paris’ 5th district. I took this photo yesterday while on a short walk, as we are currently in our second nation-wide lockdown. It was a chilly, but sunny day, and I loved every part of it! Do you know of this place? Have you ever visited before? (Please correct me if I made any mistakes in English 🙂)

Overall, you write very well! I just fine tuned it a bit to match how I would have written it :)

6 ноября 2020 г.

This is Le jardin du Luxembourg, in Paris’s 5th arrondissement. I took this picture yesterday while walking a bit as a result of the second lockdown in France. It was a chilly but sunny day, and I loved every part of it! Do you know this place? Have you ever been there? (Please correct me if I made a mistake in English 🙂)

En anglais on ne met pas d’espace entre un mot et un point d’exclamation ou un point d’interrogation. :)

6 ноября 2020 г.

Bonjour Margaux,this is all very good,some suggestions for you; in the 5th arrondissement of Paris.While walking around these beautiful gardens yesterday, I took this picture.In France, we now have this second lockdown. It was a lovely day for November, sunny and chillly. Yes I have been to these gardens,they are beautiful.Could you please correct any mistakes?J’espère que cela peut vous aider.

5 ноября 2020 г.

This is Le jardin du Luxembourg, in the Paris 5th arrondissement. I took this picture yesterday while walking a bit, because of the second lockdown in France. It was a chilly, but sunny, day, and I loved every part of it ! Do you know this place ? Have you ever been there ? (Please correct me if I made a mistake in English 🙂)

This sounds pretty native. I changed “second time” lockdown to “second” lockdown. I capitalized the word English. Nice job!

5 ноября 2020 г.

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