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Jason wan(kid&adult)
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Abnormally high temperatures, frequent wildfires and floods… Extreme weather events keep growing as global warming gets worse. Even disasters that were once described as “once-in-a-century” are happening more often. Climate change is no longer a distant warning. It is something we can feel in our daily lives. Small efforts from every person add up. Saving electricity, cutting waste, choosing low-carbon travel. Every little choice matters for our planet’s future.
23 июля 2026 г., 7:10
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Abnormally high temperatures, frequent wildfires, and floods… Extreme weather events continue to become more frequent as global warming worsens. Even disasters that were once described as “once-in-a-century” events are happening more often. Climate change is no longer a distant warning. It is something we can feel in our daily lives. Small efforts from every person add up. Saving electricity, reducing waste, and choosing low-carbon forms of transport, every little choice matters for our planet’s future.
Level: C1+. This is an excellent piece of writing. Your vocabulary is varied and appropriate for an environmental topic, and your ideas are well organised. The tone is persuasive and informative, similar to that of a magazine or awareness campaign. Only a few stylistic refinements were needed to make the English sound even more natural. Excellent work! 😊
23 июля 2026 г., 12:41
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Jason wan(kid&adult)
Языковые навыки
китайский (путунхуа), китайский (кантонский), китайский (другой), английский, французский
Изучаемый язык
китайский (кантонский), английский, французский