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As we all know, technology is a double-edged sword, which has not only strengthened the dominance of some languages, but also put others at a disadvantage, even in danger. It simplifies the languages and reduces the diversity of other languages. But is technology only bad for language development? I don't think so. Technology acts as an amplifier in language communication. These languages in rural or remote areas have their own rhythmic beauty and unique cultures, some languages lovers and the native speakers in these languages spread them by internet, in the end, it will become a trend to spreading these languages and appeals to a larger number of people to study them. Along the way, the technology will amplify the influence of languages. In other ways, the languages lovers can learn the languages through internet, the native speakers in rural or remote areas can teach others online. There is a worth noting that many languages do not have their own characters, which will bring many difficulties in preservation and education. Although we can now save video materials and audio materials, etc., how to teach others to learn these languages is also a huge challenge. But overall, technology has helped more people pay attention to the languages development in rural areas. Technology not only expands the influence of language, but changes the form of language. The languages in remote areas add many elements to traditional text symbols, which changes the expression of languages. In some cases, it makes the languages thrive in a new way. With the high frequency of the languages use, the larger their audience, the better for their development. Technology has integrated the languages in rural areas into our lives, enabling them to easily become a part of our lives, although we have no idea about them before. So the languages development in rural or remote areas can flourish through our efforts. Everyone takes a small step, the language developmemt takes a big step.
15 июня 2022 г., 5:00
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As we all know, technology is a double-edged sword that has not only strengthened the dominance of some languages, but also put others at a disadvantage and even in danger. It simplifies languages and reduces the diversity of other languages. But is technology only bad for language development? I don't think so. Technology acts as an amplifier for language communication. These languages in rural or remote areas have their own rhythmic beauty and unique cultures. Some language lovers and native speakers of these languages spread them on the Internet. In the end, it will become a trend to spread these languages and attract more people to learn them. Along the way, technology will amplify the influence of language. In other ways, language lovers can learn languages through the Internet, and native speakers in rural or remote areas can teach others online. It is worth noting that many languages do not have their own characters, which will bring many difficulties to the preservation and education of languages. Although we can now save video materials and audio materials, etc., how to teach others to learn these languages is likewise a huge challenge. But overall, technology has helped more people pay attention to language development in rural areas. Technology not only extends the influence of language, but also changes the form of language. Languages in remote areas add many elements to traditional text symbols, which changes the expression of languages. In some cases, it makes the languages thrive in a new way. With the high frequency of the languages used, the larger the audience, the better for their development. Technology has integrated rural languages into our lives, allowing them to easily become a part of our lives, although we had no idea about them before. Therefore, through our efforts, language development in rural or remote areas can flourish. Everyone takes a small step, language development takes a big step.
修改后,文章行文连贯,衔接手段运用自如,段落间逻辑紧密层次分明,实为佳作! 文中共使用了8种逻辑连接词,使用较多的有表示并列、因果、转折关系的逻辑连接词。合理运用逻辑连接词可增强文章的连贯性与逻辑性,建议适当积累一些逻辑连接词。
15 июня 2022 г.
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