In my point of view, all of us should be aware that doing something is necessary. As far as I concern, I am trying to reduce the use of products whose manufacture hurt the ozone layer. In addition, I

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In my point of view, all of us should be aware that doing something is necessary. As far as I concern, I am trying to reduce the use of products whose manufacture hurt the ozone layer. In addition, I procure to go to work on foot and to reduce the power consumption.

6 дек. 2022 г., 13:41

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In my view, all of us should be aware that doing something is necessary. As far as my own habits are concerned, I am trying to reduce my use of products whose manufacture hurts the ozone layer. Additionally, I go to work by foot and am reducing my power consumption.

"In my point of view" is incorrect. You either say "From my point of view" or "In my view". You are talking about your own habits so use "my".

7 декабря 2022 г.

In my point of view, all of us should be aware that doing something is necessary. As far as I am concerned, I am trying to reduce the use of manufactured products that hurt the ozone layer. In addition, I intend to go to work on foot and to reduce my power consumption.

Hola. Great text! And you're right, it's important that we all do small things to help protect our environment for future generations. :-)

6 декабря 2022 г.

In my point of view, all of us should be aware that doing something is necessary. As far as I am concerned, I am trying to reduce the use of products which are manufactured in a way that damages the ozone layer. In addition, I choose to go to work on foot to reduce energy consumption and pollution.

6 декабря 2022 г.

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