Today's my favorite idol YEJI's birthday!! I made a cake to celebrate yesterday. I made it for the first time, so I couldn't do it very nice. But it tasted good.

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26 мая 2025 г., 1:21

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Today's my favorite idol YEJI's birthday!! I made a cake to celebrate yesterday. It was my first time making one, so I couldn't do it very well. But it tasted good.

"one" refers to the cake (i.e. I assumed you meant it was your first time making a cake). Great job with this!

26 мая 2025 г., 1:34

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