The followings are the records of my diary: 13th June 2022 Sunny China Today I wasn't busy with my work, so I drew some characters from One Piece. I didn't think I had the talent for painting before,

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Emily

The followings are the records of my diary: 13th June 2022 Sunny China Today I wasn't busy with my work, so I drew some characters from One Piece. I didn't think I had the talent for painting before, but now I have changed my mind. I shared the pictures I drew, and I 'll be very happy if you also like them too. Then I want to develop my interests as much as possible when I was young, so I don't feel bored when I retire in the future.

13 июня 2022 г., 13:23

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The following is the entry in my diary for 13th June 2022. Sunny China Today I wasn't busy with work, so I drew some characters from One Piece. I didn't think I had the talent for painting before, but now I have changed my mind. I have shared the pictures I drew, and I 'd be very happy if you like them too. I want to develop my interests as much as possible while I'm young, so I don't feel bored when I retire.

你好 Emily. Here "entry" is what you have written in your diary for a particular day. Just work, since it's obviously yours and not anybody else's! Have shared - it's a completed action here. I'd (I would) is the conditional. "Too" is the same as "also", so it'd be repeating the same thing. "In the future" isn't wrong exactly, but it's obvious that you'll retire in the future. Keep practicing - with English AND drawing!

13 июня 2022 г.

The followings are the records of my diary: 13th June 2022 Sunny China Today I wasn't busy with my work, so I drew some characters from One Piece. I didn't think I had the talent for painting before, but now I have changed my mind. I shared the pictures I drew, and I 'd be very happy if you liked them too. I want to develop my passions as much as possible while I'm still young so (that) I won't feel bored when I retire.

You're a pretty good drawer. Good work.

13 июня 2022 г.

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