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1) Anna isn’t at work, she’s down with covid and is staying home. 2) We might be in for a fining if we don’t pay our electricity bills. 3) I was into music when I was a teen, but then I chose theater instead. 4) Sally got into chess playing because her father won a regional championship twenty years ago. 5) The weather has been keeing me in, but I really hope for tomorrow’s improvement the forecast promises. 6) The performance was made up of dancing and colorful lighting which produced an astonishing effect. 7) Sergei is off of drinking strong alcohol for three months, but he still drinks beer. 8) My brother was off today, so we went fishing and spent a very good time together. 9) The bread is off, it’s stale and mouldy. Take these pancakes I made in the morning instead. 10) What’s on the radio tonight? There might be one of the Rachmaninoff’s piano concerts as this is his 150th birthday anniversary.
3 апр. 2023 г., 12:47
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Anna isn’t at work because she has COVID and is staying home. We might get fined if we don’t pay our electricity bills. I was into music when I was a teenager, but then I chose theater instead. Sally got into playing chess because her father won a regional championship twenty years ago. The weather has been keeping me inside, but I really hope for an improvement tomorrow as the forecast promises. The performance consisted of dancing and colorful lighting, which produced an astonishing effect. Sergei has given up drinking strong alcohol for three months, but he still drinks beer. My brother had the day off today, so we went fishing and had a very good time together. The bread has gone off; it's stale and mouldy. Take these pancakes I made this morning instead. What’s on the radio tonight? They might play one of Rachmaninoff’s piano concerts as this is his 150th birthday anniversary.
In the first sentence, "down with" should be changed to "has" to correctly convey that Anna has COVID. In the second sentence, "in for a fining" should be changed to "get fined" to make it grammatically correct. In the third sentence, "teen" should be changed to "teenager" to make it more formal. In the fourth sentence, "chess playing" should be changed to "playing chess" for correct sentence structure. In the fifth sentence, "keeing" should be changed to "keeping" to make it grammatically correct. In the sixth sentence, "was made up of" should be changed to "consisted of" for correct sentence structure. In the seventh sentence, "off of drinking" should be changed to "given up drinking" to be more clear. In the eighth sentence, "was off" should be changed to "had the day off" to make it more formal. In the ninth sentence, "off" should be changed to "has gone off" to correctly convey that the bread is no longer fresh. In the tenth sentence, "there might be" should be changed to "they might play" for correct sentence structure.
7 апреля 2023 г.
1) Anna isn’t at work, she’s down with covid and is staying home. 2) We might be in for a fine if we don’t pay our electricity bills. 3) I was into music when I was a teen, but then I chose theater instead. 4) Sally got into chess playing because her father won a regional championship twenty years ago. 5) The weather has been keeping me in, but I really hope tomorrow’s forecast improves. 6) The performance was made up of dancing and colorful lighting which produced an astonishing effect. 7) Sergei is no longer drinking strong alcohol but for the past three months, he still drinks (has been drinking) beer. 8) My brother was off today, so we went fishing and spent a very good time together. 9) The bread is off, it’s stale and moldy. Take these pancakes I made in the morning instead. 10) What’s on the radio tonight? There might be one of the Rachmaninoff’s piano concerts as this is his 150th birthday anniversary.
7 апреля 2023 г.
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