I have talked with her for two hours. She is very loving，caring for three cats and liking them. She has a close family，a boyfriend who loves her so much . Next Friday，she will give him a surprise. She is good at making cakes.She plans to make a chocolate cake with some nuts for him.I think it will be delicious. I am moved by her warm heart and her good relationships. She has given me much advice. When she heard about my story ，she always said“ I am so sorry”.I did not want to make her sad，so I tried to find some good stories of my life，although it was a little difficult for me. 2.In fact I envy her.I envy her beauty，envy her talent for loving others and living well，envy her good family and good boyfriend. I have been in a bad life for twenty four years ，It is too difficult for me to have a happy time.I am afraid that when I am happy，it will be ruined by an accident.So I have to keep fearing，remain vigilant all the time. Well done Vara. More nice writing from you, good use of tenses. Advice is an uncountable noun. So it’s ’much advice’. You could make it sound more plural by saying something like ‘many pieces/bits of advice’

I have talked with her for two hours. She is very loving，cares for three cats, and likes them. She has a close family and a boyfriend who loves her so much . Next Friday she will give him a surprise. She is good at making cakes. She plans to make a chocolate cake with some nuts for him. I think it will be delicious. I am moved by her warm heart and her good relationships. She has given me much advice. Whenever she heard about my story，she always said “I am so sorry”. I did not want to make her sad so I tried to find some good stories from my life although it was a little difficult for me. 2. In fact, I envy her. I envy her beauty，her talents for loving others and living well，her good family, and her good boyfriend. Mine has been a bad life for twenty-four years. It is too difficult for me to experience happiness. Were I to become happy，I fear it being ruined by an accident. So I remain fearful and vigilant all the time.