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It was sunny today. We headed to the central park this morning, but my mom detoured to a vintage shop to buy a pair of Dr. Martens boots. She was thrilled with the great deal she found. We strolled around the park for hours, and my dad even took a nap on a bench because the atmosphere was so relaxing. He snored on that bench like a hobo. As the sun began to set, we went up the Fukuoka Tower. The city's night skyline was absolutely stunning. We took a lot of breathtaking pictures there. I think I had been walking too much and my feet were killing me. So we took a taxi home, which cost a fortune. We should plan our routes better next time to avoid taking taxis.
21 окт. 2024 г., 13:20
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It was sunny today. We headed down to the central park this morning, but my mom took a detour to a vintage shop to buy a pair of Dr. Martens boots. She was thrilled with the great deal she found. We strolled around the park for hours, and my dad even took a nap on a bench because the atmosphere was so relaxing. He snored on that bench like a hobo. As the sun began to set, we went up the Fukuoka Tower. The city's night skyline was absolutely stunning. We took a lot of breathtaking pictures there. I think I had been walking too much as my feet were killing me. So we took a taxi home, which cost a fortune. We should plan our routes better next time to avoid taking taxis.
21 октября 2024 г.
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It was sunny today. We headed to the central park this morning, but my mom
detoured to a vintage shop to buy a pair of Dr. Martens boots. She was thrilled
with the great deal she found. We strolled around the park for hours, and my dad
even took a nap on a bench because the atmosphere was so relaxing. He snored on
that bench like a hobo. As the sun began to set, we went up the Fukuoka Tower.
The city's night skyline was absolutely stunning. We took a lot of breathtaking
pictures there. I think I had been walking too much and my feet were killing me.
So we took a taxi home, which cost a fortune. We should plan our routes better
next time to avoid taking taxis.
All good!
21 октября 2024 г.
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It was sunny today. We headed to the central park this morning, but my mom
detoured to a vintage shop to buy a pair of Dr. Martens boots. She was thrilled
with the great deal she found. We strolled around the park for hours, and my dad
even took a nap on a bench because the atmosphere was so relaxing. He snored on
that bench like a hobo. As the sun began to set, we went up the Fukuoka Tower.
The city's night skyline was absolutely stunning. We took a lot of breathtaking
pictures there. I think I had been walking too much and my feet were killing me.
So we took a taxi home, which cost a fortune. We should plan our routes better
next time to avoid taking taxis.
Well done! Nice piece of prose
21 октября 2024 г.
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The Tim じぁん!!!
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китайский (путунхуа), английский, японский
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английский
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