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wendy
I have just returned from my trip. Last week was a seven-day vacation, so planning a trip was on my must to do list. In later fall, the weather got cool in most places, so this time was the best time for travelling. However, most people had the same idea like me which caused that it's really hard to book train tickets to those hot destinations. I was quite lucky to book four tickets for my family to Xinjiang province which was one of the hottest places visitors crowded to. You know that experiencing a place where was full of unique and different culture, scenery and food was really fun. We soent most our time on enjoying local food and walking around those famous streets. Though we felt exhausted sometimes, we still kept walking to experience all the things on our list. Shopping was another exciting thing worth doing. We bought a lot of local snacks and shipped them home for free. Nobody worried to carry plenty of items after a fantastic trip, they even arrived home earlier than you. What a wonderful trip I had!
12 окт. 2024 г., 3:27
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I have just returned from my trip. Last week was a seven-day vacation, so
planning a trip was on my must to-do (needs a hyphen) list. In later fall, the weather gets cool
in most places (you’re talking about the future here) so this time was the best time for travelling. However, most
people had the same idea as me (sounds better) which made it really hard (keep your writing simple) to book
train tickets to those hot destinations. I was quite lucky to book four tickets
for my family to Xinjiang province, which was (do you want the past tense here?) one of the hottest places visitors
go to. You know that experiencing a place which was full of unique and
different culture, scenery and food was really fun. We spent most our time (don’t need the word ‘on’ with enjoy)
enjoying local food and walking around those famous streets. Though we felt
exhausted sometimes, we still kept walking to experience all the things on our
list. Shopping was another exciting thing worth doing. We bought a lot of local
snacks and shipped them home for free. Nobody worried about carrying (needs the gerund) plenty of items
after a fantastic trip, they even arrived home earlier than us. What a
wonderful trip I had!
12 октября 2024 г.
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wendy
Языковые навыки
китайский (путунхуа), английский
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английский
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