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wendy
I always hear that someone who is very successful like to visit their elementery school teachers on special days. There must be something really important the teachers had taught them. We always say that button the first button in our life can affect the rest of our life. So, who is the first preson help us button our first life button besides our parents? The answer must be teachers for most people. Teachers not only teach us knowledges in class, but also lead us to be a better self. They helped us overcome many tough times in our life. They taught us howto be alind person. We like to use burning candles to desribe our teachers. They light up their students' road without complaining anything until they are too old to stand on the platform. Most people usually respect the unselfish and positive people in their life, teachers certainly fall into this category.
24 сент. 2025 г., 8:37
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I often hear that successful people like to visit their elementary school teachers on special days. There must be something very important that the teachers taught them. We often say that fastening the first button in life can affect the rest of our journey. So, who is the first person who helps us fasten that first button besides our parents? For most people, the answer is teachers. Teachers not only teach us knowledge in class, but also guide us to become better people. They help us overcome many difficult times in life. They teach us how to be kind and honest. We often use the image of a burning candle to describe teachers. They light their students’ path without complaint, until they are too old to stand on the platform. Most people respect the unselfish and positive figures in their lives, and teachers certainly belong to this group.
“elementery” should be spelled “elementary.” “I always hear that someone who is very successful like to visit” is smoother than “I often hear that successful people like to visit.” “fastening the first button in life” is clearer than “button the first button in our life.” “the first person who helps us fasten that first button” is smoother than “the first preson help us button our first life button.” “knowledge” is correct; “knowledges” is not used in English. “guide us to become better people” is more natural than “lead us to be a better self.” “kind and honest” is clearer than “alind person,” which seems to be a spelling mistake. “light their students’ path” is smoother than “light up their students’ road.”
25 сент. 2025 г., 3:30
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