This is my first time to say something in this community! So when children go online, they have tons of problems! Security, tons of dirty information and risk to see some bad people without parents knowing that! But, on the other hand, they can avoid accidents physically, they can meet vehicles, nor bikes on streets!
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This is my first time to say something in this community! So when children go
online, they have tons of risks! Security, tons of dirty information, and risk
of meeting bad people without their parents knowing! But on the other hand,
they can avoid accidents physically such as they can't meet vehicles nor bikes on
streets!
A "problem" is something bad that is happening now. That is why I changed it to "risks." A risk can turn into a problem, though.
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