Davide
Can someone check the grammar, please? Thank you. Firstly, many teenagers depend on their parents, in my view it is important that parents financially support their children. Many parents think that teenagers should get their own pocket money, but in my opinion, this is a way to encourage them to engage in non-virtuous behaviours. So, I think that giving the pocket money is important for many reasons, for example to encourage teenagers to study more and don’t work since they are young. However, teenagers don’t often make a good use of their pocket money, using it for alcohol and drugs. So, I think that there must always be parental supervision on the consumption that children make. Sometimes, giving guidance on how best to use the money is necessary. Finally, I would say that it is extremely necessary to give teenagers pocket money, and let them manage it, this is also a way to give confidence to their children. On the other hand, parents need to be careful how the teenagers spend this money.
23 мар. 2024 г., 11:27
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First of all, many teenagers depend on their parents. In my opinion, it is important that parents are able to financially support their children. Many parents think that teenagers should get their own pocket money; the way I see it, this is a way to encourage them to engage in non-virtuous behaviours. Therefore, I believe that financial support is important for many reasons. For example, to encourage teenagers to study more and not work since they are young. However, teenagers don’t often make a good use of their pocket money, using it for alcohol and drugs. So, I think that there must always be parental supervision on the purchases that children make. Sometimes, giving kids and teenagers advice on how best to use the money is necessary. Finally, I would say that it is important to give teenagers pocket money, and let them manage it themselves because it is a way build up their child's confidence. On the other hand, parents need to be careful with how the teenagers spend this money.
ciao amico! Here's the edits for you. I fixed the grammar and increased the readability. Overall, good job you know how to express what you are thinking in English well enough to be understood.
23 марта 2024 г.
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Many teenagers depend on their parents. In my view, it is important for parents to financially support their children. Some parents think that teenagers should earn their own pocket money, but in my opinion, this encourages them to engage in non-virtuous behaviors. I think that giving teenagers pocket money is important to encourage them to study more since they are still young. However, I also understand that teenagers don’t often make good use of their pocket money. So, I think that there must always be parental supervision regarding the purchases children make. Sometimes, giving guidance on how best to use the money is necessary. Finally, I would say that giving teenagers pocket money and letting them manage it can help children gain confidence. **** As the parent of a teenager, I think that they do need some "skin the game", but it's okay for parents to help, too.
24 марта 2024 г.
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