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Cyndy
上个周末,我们买了一只新的,很可爱的小狗。她叫了Coco,但我们不喜欢她的名字。正在她叫Luna.她是两个月岁。她很活跃但是很安静。我们非常高兴她是我们家庭的一部分。 Last weekend, we bought a new, cute puppy. Her name was Coco, but we didn’t like her name. Now her name is Luna. She is 2 months old. She is very active but very quiet. We are extremely happy that she is part of our family.
24 нояб. 2020 г., 18:12
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上个周末,我们买了一只新的,很可爱的小狗。 我们新买了一只可爱的小狗。 新的小狗sounds a little bit odd. 她以前叫Coco,但我们不喜欢她的名字。 现在她叫Luna. 正在 is used in continuous tense. 我正在叫他 I am calling her now 我正在叫他。 I call her Luna now. 我现在叫她Luna. 她是两个月大。 岁means year. 她很活跃但是很安静。我们非常高兴她是我们家庭的一部分。 Last weekend, we bought a new, cute puppy. Her name was Coco, but we didn’t like her name. Now her name is Luna. She is 2 months old. She is very active but very quiet. We are extremely happy that she is part of our family.
In the last English sentence, should there be a "a" before part?
25 ноября 2020 г.
上个周末,我们买了一只新的,很可爱的小狗。她叫了Coco,但我们不喜欢她的名字。正在她叫Luna.她是两个月岁。她很活跃但是很安静。我们非常高兴她是我们家庭的一部分。 Last weekend, we bought a new, cute puppy. Her name was Coco, but we didn’t like her name. Now her name is Luna. She is 2 months old. She is very active but very quiet. We are extremely happy that she is part of our family.
Aww she's so cute! 好可愛!!
25 ноября 2020 г.
上周末,我们买了一只新的,很可爱的小狗。她叫了Coco,但我们不喜欢她的名字。她现在叫Luna.她是两个月大。她很活跃但是很安静。我们非常高兴她现在是我们家庭的一员。 Last weekend, we bought a new, cute puppy. Her name was Coco, but we didn’t like her name. Now her name is Luna. She is 2 months old. She is very active but very quiet. We are extremely happy that she is part of our family.
25 ноября 2020 г.
上个周末,我们新买了一只很可爱的小狗,它叫Coco。但我们不喜欢它的名字。给它改名叫Luna.它是两个月大。它有时很活跃有时又很安静。我们非常高兴它成为我们家庭的一份子。 Last weekend, we bought a new, cute puppy. Her name was Coco, but we didn’t like her name. Now her name is Luna. She is 2 months old. She is very active but very quiet. We are extremely happy that she is part of our family.
24 ноября 2020 г.
上个周末,我们新买了一只很可爱的小狗。她叫Coco,但我们不喜欢她的名字,现在她叫Luna。她(是)两个月大。她很活跃,但是很安静。我们非常高兴她是我们家庭的一部分。 Last weekend, we bought a new, cute puppy. Her name was Coco, but we didn’t like her name. Now her name is Luna. She is 2 months old. She is very active but very quiet. We are extremely happy that she is part of our family.
24 ноября 2020 г.
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Cyndy
Языковые навыки
китайский (путунхуа), английский, французский, корейский
Изучаемый язык
китайский (путунхуа), французский, корейский